Reviews for The Benefits of Omnipotence
Guest chapter 30 . 10/23/2014
They're so out of character, it hurts to just look at it. I mean out of all the people to be devastated, it was Sakura? I actually thought Kakashi would do something since he wouldn't let his sensei's son die or at least retrieve the body. Haku and Zabuza not letting Naruto leave was also dumb as fuck. They shouldn't stay in a place too long and I'm pretty sure Zavuza wouldn't suggest a one-month tutorial with no contact and escape. That's no different from being a prisoner. A debt is not being paid here, it's the exact opposite. The divinity and whatever with kyuubi's just ridiculous as hell with all that 'oh I'm gonna be mysterious cuz I feel like it suck on that host'.
LoganAlexander chapter 8 . 10/22/2014
why in the fuck wouldn't they take a break and eat...fuck this...its stupid as fuck...luckily you never finished the story...
LoganAlexander chapter 7 . 10/22/2014
how in the hell did naruto become dumber, more childish and even more incompetent than the time before...shit I'm giving this story just a few more chapters and I really hope you'll improve the quality
LoganAlexander chapter 5 . 10/22/2014
...uh yeah the kyuubi chakra can heal holes in his chest...da fuck you say it can't heal him from poison.
LoganAlexander chapter 2 . 10/22/2014
that last part with the attack was unnecessary. If it was supposed to be funny, let me tell you that it didn't work. It was frankly disturbing. Especially seeing as the test was already over but you had kakashi attack anyway as if he was a jealous teen. I've seen you've mentioned lionheart as your inspiration. I hope that's just of the idea of time looping and nothing else because lionheart is a sociopath and his story is disturbing.
Slytherson chapter 55 . 9/16/2014
this is totally amazing so hooked can't wait to read more will be adding this to my faves and following tboo!
Gothic Rain chapter 55 . 8/19/2014
it's been 5 years since you continued...
o well bet you graduated from college and all that
or ya dead...
Either way I love you're story as many other have and will ;)
Gothic Rain chapter 51 . 8/19/2014
and he will come to life
Gothic Rain chapter 49 . 8/19/2014
strong for Naruto to do that, I was expecting him to go to jiraya but he's strong indeed
Gothic Rain chapter 35 . 8/19/2014
honestly I wouldn't want to return to such a dump of a village and instead stay with them to learn some fighting techniques and jutsus from them, but Naruto isn't me.
Love ya story
Gothic Rain chapter 34 . 8/19/2014
hahaha I feel bad for him :)
Gothic Rain chapter 33 . 8/19/2014
I was hoping for neji and his team but sigh o well
Gothic Rain chapter 30 . 8/19/2014
the evidence is destroyed so only sakura knows and I doubt she'll tell anyone so it was kind of cruel of her. I mean what of everyone else?
Gothic Rain chapter 25 . 8/19/2014
ok that's awesomely funny, but yeah in one month he's sakura's fury!
Rory O'Kane chapter 13 . 8/11/2014
That’s nothing. Gaara is even more proficient with giant nuts.
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