|Reviews for The Prince|
| kikyobashing101 chapter 13 . 4/8/2016
I was a bit reluctant to read this because of the update being so long ago but the summary was just too good to pass up! Please update again. This story is so intriguing and I want to see Ratio and L make up after a ton of more misunderstandings. I will be waiting for the next update and thank you for this amazing piece of work.
| anon chapter 13 . 3/27/2016
omigod why did i come back here i was remembering how much i liked the fic and sorta kinda hoping maybe sometime it had updated since the last time i checked a while ago but i saw the last update date and damnnnn 2008 maybe it seemed like less time back then cuz, yknow, less time had elapsed, but damnnnn 2008 okay man its clear to me im never gonna see my favourite death note fanfic update ever again yeesh 2008
on another, more personal note, man you should be like 27 now so i hope thats treating you well hope lifes treating you well and youre having a great time rn and yeah even if you moved on from fanfic hope you got other cool interests now k
| Picas Lei-Fur chapter 13 . 3/21/2016
It's been many years since you've updated this story, but I have to leave a review for this! This is one of the best Death Note fanfics I've ever read. Thank you for this story!
| ARandomReaderGuy chapter 13 . 12/28/2015
I know it has been a long while, and you probably have abandoned this, but I just want to say, this is the best piece of fanfiction of Death Note ever written.
All the things that made Death Note so amazing are still there, but now there are new twists, new things to consider. In addition, you actually made Light MORE human by making him a yaukuza. Amazing.
I just don't have the time to write out all the good things I want to say about this story. I hope you write this well in everything you do
| antiignition chapter 13 . 9/3/2015
...It's been seven years.
THIS close to screaming my guts out.
Why must all the amazing stories be abandoned? Why must all the fantastic authors die?
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2015
I find this version of Light more likeable than the original even though they are essentially using the Death Note in the same way, for the same purpose. Somehow the fact that he doesn't have a god complex due to his experiences and doesn't believe himself to be excused for his wrongdoings makes him...not better, in a sense, but a lot more likeable. A little ironic in the sense that in believing himself to be morally inferior to most others and wanting condemnation for his sins, he is actually morally better than many others, from my perspective at least. Wonder how this would turn out? Though, I am certain that if this does end in his defeat like the original, he would go out a helluva lot more dignified, and the process would be /very/ different indeed.
| Sly chapter 13 . 8/9/2015
This sstory is simply excellent! I love how clever both L and Raito/Kira prove themselvess to be. It's a pity that the story stopped updating approximately 7 yearss ago. Oh well, if you do get to reading this, I would love to see an update ssome time in the future.
Ta ta for now!
| vindicta chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
I've read this incredible story at least 4 times now and I'm still sad that it wasn't finished..it's rare to see a fic with so much potential ( Can I ask if you are ok? it's been years ,I know, but I really need to know if this has been definitely abandoned or if there's still hope it's been a fav of mine for years and I still love it
| Feethei chapter 13 . 7/16/2015
Wow. A great story, I love the whole concept. Admittedly I've skimmed a few of the more... graphic parts, since those are not my thing. But I love the relationship of L and Light (I can't wait until L gains a bit more understanding of Lights character), I love the plotting Raito does (he's brilliant and you've done well in showing it) and I love Lights twisted morality and broken, yet outwardly arrogant, mind. He's so hopeless, poor thing - L needs to heal him, but it will be a long road.
I hope you continue this eventually, once you have time. Though if you have outgrown it I understand. Continue writing, though, your work is excellent!
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/13/2015
It's been seven years
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/11/2015
Awesome story, but I assume you have abandoned it.
| maboroshi kaji1 chapter 13 . 7/10/2015
Loved your story.
| randym chapter 10 . 7/2/2015
Favorite: ""Ryuuzaki, I have talked with the FBI and they refused to let you, I cite, 'traipse around in their system after Kira has already caused such a mess'." Watari told him."
Although 'already' was in that sentence twice. I found this bit quite amusing. [I've found most of it to be so, but this in particular.] Good job.
| randym chapter 9 . 7/2/2015
Absolutely LOVED the 'okay, who's turn is it to try to chase them out?' on the Kira forum.
| Blazedoll chapter 13 . 5/24/2015
Its a great fic, please update soon. There is such an ease with your writing, and everything has been explained with such beautiful detail. I was hooked to this story till the end. I really hope you continue it..