I read this entire story in one day and it's one of the best stories I've read in all of fandom.I'm not even joking; it has a whirlwind of emotions and the characters are captured in so many different I can actually picture this happening and I honestly am enthralled by how you captured Kimblee and 's so hard to find anything on this pair and even though this hasn't been updated in quite some time it's so enjoyable.

This chapter is gold. I need to see this! I need this as sitcom on TV... in live-action... I need to see those scenes, because there are so many emotions in this!

THIS. This was the best fanfic. I didnt even know I could feel so many different emotions during reading something FMA related, because I thought the anime itself stripped me of all my feelings, but no, it wasnt enough. I read the whole fanfiction in like two hours, because I couldnt stop myself from reading. Most Kimblee/Archer fanfics are about the two of them fucking their brains out, but this one was different - it was sad, moving, emotional, funny, hilarious, thrilling and dramatic. The ending surprised me, but positively. I love Kimblee and Im so happy that I could read this. Thank you so much!

Great chapter. I was kinda hoping Greed would still be alive in your fic, but what is is what is. I'm kinda worried about Archer's interesting in Marta. I hope Kimblee doesn't get hurt in all of this.

Oooo. This could turn out to be bad. Kimblee is acting less impulsive, with is impressive with his sociopathic tendencies. I really hope Marta doesn't hurt him.

I loved this chapter! Kimblee got to have fun and even see his Archer kill. Too bad the rest of his fantasy won't be coming true for him. I feel kinda bad for the kids, but they had their warning and they could have backed off after the first one got shot. Such is such.

Wow. Kimblee certainly has issues, but at least he knows what he likes. I know. I most likely should be saying, "Oh no! That crazy man wants to hurt people!". Can't though. I'm on team Kimblee after all.

This story is really well written and very fun to read. I still hope everyone makes it out alive though. Well, the ones I care about anyway.

That was both a brilliant move on Archer's part and a stupid one. I love that Kimblee is aware that he's being over the top with his cutesy affection. Maybe it just started as cute puppy love but he cranked it up to eleven when he noticed the results. It bears thinking. Anyway, I loved all the character interactions and I found it hilarious that Roy would state that Kimblee is psychotic. Of course he's psychotic. That's common knowledge! Being psychotic isn't so bad though. It all depends on the degree.

Uh oh.

That's about how good that situation could have possibly gone. I hope Archer just invited Mustang along to be polite. It wouldn't have turned out well if he had accepted. Oooooh. I hope this continues to be AU. I don't want either of those two to die.

I wonder if Kimblee knew the rag was poisonous...? Ah, the dangers of forgetting who you are dealing with. Most mentally ill people aren't dangerous, Kimblee not being one of those people. In the end though, you do what you have to do. No one wants to be forced to live in the darkness.

Poor Kimblee. Being sent away like a disobedient child that a parent doesn't want at their 'grown up' party. I'm sure the gunshot did get Kimblee's attention, I'm sure he isn't used to feeling scared.

That went about as well as it possibly could go. Kimblee didn't kill Mustang and Archer didn't kill Kimblee. Kimblee was also able to get a kiss out of it! I love it. This is such a great story!

Oh my. This isn't going to go well. I'm impressed with Kimblee's restraint. This is going to get interesting.

That last paragraph was beyond awesome! I can just imagine how the serial killer felt when he met the eyes of one Zolf J. Kimblee. This was a great chapter. I had really thought that Archer had realized that Kimblee liked him in the last chapter, but apparently he didn't realize the depth. I wonder what will happen now?