Now we have an EMBARRASSED, confused, lonely, frustrated, jealous, psychotic, sociopath. And I think Archer has caught on. He's not stupid. I thought it was cute that Kimblee wanted to sleep with Archer. I really feel for Kimblee. It's so lonely being mentally ill in society. If people know, most won't want anything to do with you, and that's not fair.

Nothing is quite as dangerous as a lonely, frustrated, jealous, psychotic, sociopath. I can't say I blam Kimblee though. I hate being alone. That was quite the scene when Kimblee help Archer participate in murdering the random women they picked up. It was almost sensual. I think that's what you were going for. I'm sure that's what Kimblee feels when he does what he does. The insane mind doesn't work like those who are deemed sane. It takes pleasures in areas we would never dream of. I love all the differences there can be, although I would much rather Kimblee not blow ME up.

I liked this chapter too. Poor Kimblee. He just can't get Archer's attention. I loved how Archer tugged on Kimblee's ponytail. I love people playing with other people's hair like that.

This was such an awesome chapter! I can see much of this happening! I'm sure Kimblee isn't that great of a shot or he would be using a gun with alchemically enhanced 'boom' bullets. I CAN see him turning the GUN into a bomb like that. That was awesome. Great job!

That was awesome too! I love how you write Kimblee. He isn't sane and he shouldn't be portrayed that way. You do a good job. So you think that blowing people up is more orgasmic than sex for Kimblee? That would be interesting if so.

That was a cruel trick that Kimblee pulled. I was actually looking forward to seeing whether Archer could do alchemy or not. Ah well. I love Kimblee. This was an awesome chapter and I love the story so far!

"How comforting." Archer sighed and rested his chin in his hand. "So what made my bum so interesting again?"

"It's attached to you?"

XDDD Died laughing. I realized this isn't quite finished, if it is, please tell me so. I loved this fanfiction very much.

You're still working on this, right, the ending, it was a good end, if it's the end, but it's missing the grand finale, if you know what I mean xD

*blushes dark red* I love this story! I read all of this in only 2 days~! ~smiles happily~

This is so Awesome, and so in-character, but in a way that makes it more canon-like(normally I'm not much of a KimbleexArcher fan, but this story makes it fit so well).

Also, I used to completely loath the anime-verse Kimblee, but this story made me see him as more of a not-so-teenage delinquent version of the manga version, so I'm cool with it now. :D

I saw thr this hadn't been updated in a while, so I wanted to know, did you never get round to writing another chapter, or is this discontinued? I hope it hasn't been discountinued because of how Awesome this is!

I'm so in love with this story, everyone is portrayed perfectly. I was so upset when I saw that there were only 23 chapters and you hadn't written in a while.

dude you did an amazing job with this whole story! Archer is kept in charactor so well! and i love how you portray kimblee! cute but in a sadistic way :)

Quick question though, i noticed this story isn't complete so i was wondering if there will be an upcoming chapter where kimblee and archer finnaly have sex?

cuz that would be perfect!

Omg I so love this. There isn't enough of this couple...i mean with an actual plot line anyway -.- I can't wait for the next chapter ~3 -huggles-

You're story is a masterpiece, I got totally hook and that doesn't happen a lot. I hope you plan on continuing it I have to know what happens, so I'll be keeping an eye on it. Keep up the good work!

I read this fic in *looks at clock* a hour. And I'm completly in love with it. You portray Kimblee and Archer perfectly and it's darkly funny! Wonderful job!