Reviews for Knowing When To Stop
Veryfairygirl14 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
sounds like the beginning of a great story
Chocofreakazoid chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
interesting plot
EnforcerAndAccuserFan chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
This sounds like an interesting plot. Please commence writing. It could easily be a shock to Elliot's system because he has always felt that his family's world and the one he deals with are two distant entities. Although he got a taste of reality when Kathleen is arrested and then his wife is briefly though benevolently held prisoner (Kathy maintined her calm and poise like the nurse she is), he has never had to deal with any of his children being in danger. And that is probably his (and any parent's) worse nightmare. So proceed with the story. You should also include members of his squad, including Fin, who is a parent himself.
PaceyW'sgirl chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
i would love to read more of this story so, hope that you write this one.