Reviews for Green Jolt
Nidaime Rikudou Sennin chapter 11 . 3/3
I think this should be moved to M rated for the swearing and other content
Guest chapter 11 . 6/27/2013
seriously what the fuck is going on?
Guest chapter 8 . 6/27/2013
my god i am confused
TheWolf87 chapter 16 . 5/17/2013
great story and the sequel is missing?
LittleKing9512 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I half expected it to be Stark. (shrugs.)
Atlanticfire chapter 10 . 8/26/2012
Eeeevvvviiiillll but awesomely disturbing
rescue 007 chapter 12 . 2/7/2012
Yeah I'm done here. The first few chaps were ok but now it just got a little.. Well really fucking stupid. I can see why you didn't bother to continue past chapter 16
rescue 007 chapter 10 . 2/7/2012
You have made Ichigo sort of a weak little bitch in my opinion. He's either spent the whole story being carried or being beat up.
Athina Dark-Angel of Death chapter 16 . 8/4/2010
brilliant story if a bit depressing
frnjkdfns.ja chapter 16 . 1/17/2010
froggy-slice is no longer doing it now what
Space Odin chapter 4 . 6/17/2009
sorry about the last review what i was trying to say before i was rudely cut off was try hopefully this comes up.
Space Odin chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
if you're looking for doujin then try
Meggie pooop chapter 5 . 6/11/2009
I think that this is the best story ever!
Fiber Jar chapter 16 . 2/14/2009
Kinda a deeper kind of pairing, sort of within your fic.

But, I had to FORCE myself to go on, but I gave up on chapter 14.

Your fanfic is just SO hard to read. Not the content, but the style of writing. It just seems kinda boring, full of dead meat.
Uraharaweird chapter 13 . 2/3/2009
dude, this is sick. I aint reading no more. Try something with a little less gore. Also, how is this adventure? I just dont see the connection.
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