Reviews for The meaning of christmas
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Very good Christmas poetry.
Nonnimus chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Hi there! This is a nice poem. :) But if you don't mind, I'd just like to say this tho:

"A precious babe born in a manger,

Who would later die to save us?.."

Isn't it better if it's written:

"A precious babe born in a manger,

Who later died to save us?.."

After all, Jesus has already died, and rose again... once and for all... :)
two fish chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Blank lines? Hmm... If you mean what I think you mean, try going to the "edit" screen after uploading your document, then press the button that looks like a bar, and it should give you a line that separates the text. Then save it, of course. (Sorry, I hope that helps you more than confuses you!). Anyway, I think you really capture all the levels of Christmas in your poem. Then you ended with that bit about romance, brilliantly funny. Great job. :)
Fizzing-Whizbee-nz chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Aw that's awesome Sis, it captures the meaning of Christmas and all the magic of it. Very well written!