Reviews for You Had Me At Hello |
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![]() ![]() Beautiful story |
![]() ![]() Edward as a human |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much |
![]() ![]() You made a mistake when you introduced Rosalie :'"That's Rosalie, Emmett's boyfriend," he said, motioning towards the blonde and the muscular man.' |
![]() ![]() Plz update |
![]() ![]() An Edward pov how awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Confused: " i pull a white dress on and got out of the toilet" |
![]() ![]() ![]() When Edward is introducing Bella to the family you said "this Rosalie, Emmett's boyfriend" should it not be girlfriend or wife? |
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![]() ![]() When will be next chap be updated |
![]() ![]() ![]() paragraph 75 tipeo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guess the only thing I dislike about your story is how Mike, the owner of the strip joint and Ryan have never been punished. They got away with everything scott free. And need I remind you that Ryan selling Bella was human trafficing and slavery. They should be arrested and impaled through their dicks for: slavery, exploitation of a minor, prostitution, attempted rape, assault, and child abuse an probably numerous other crimes against Bella yet they get no punishment? BULL FUCKING SHIT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought she was a dancer, why would she be a klutz dancing |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow awesome story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Has Alice grin on face) I STOPPED CRYING! (sort of) It's nice to know that Edward will save her from this terrible life |