|Reviews for Broken Soul|
| Fraulein Kreuz24 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Interesting... very interesting, indeed
For the Tensai, the scene might have been shocking as - well, I don't know - seeing the man with whom you held a grudge for hurting your beloved kissing... Scalding harsh, man! TTnTT
But it also got me wondering whether it was really Tezuka kissing Atobe that Fuji had witnessed, or the other way around? I mean, it doesn't seem to be that Tezuka is in bad terms with Atobe over the injury, but rather appreciated that the king took him on a serious match back then... So, maybe Tezuka had asked Atobe for some *ahem* assistance regarding that *ahem* kiss (nobody wants their first kiss with their special someone to be remembered as sloppy, ne? ), but hadn't expecting Fuji to walk into and see that...? O.o"
As for Fuji... if I were in his shoes, I might have silently left the office without further notice, and drown the jealously and hurt by myself (not to cause anyone to worry over me); or maybe knock at the office door to get their attention, and pretend throughout the meeting that it doesn't affect me - that it doesn't kill me inside - at all, before leaving the two - with my smiling kept plastered tight - and after then wallow my bitter tears alone. BUT I'M MORE FOR THE SECOND OPTION IF FOR THE SAKE OF MY OWN GUILT-TRIPPING REVENGE ON TEZUKA AND ATOBE! Either way, I'm sure Fuji is a strong individual, and things 'will definitely work fine' for him... He isn't called a sadistic Tensai for nothing *
But these are just my thoughts, though... Gomen for my long rumblings here. *scratches back of head with bashful laugh* I'm sure whatever you write next will be a surprise, and I can't wait to read more from you.
Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for your next update
| Seishirou Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Ne, ne.. Update the next one. Wanna read! u
Oh, thanks for reading my fic. I'm so happy!
| yukitenshixxx chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
oh you just peaked my interest. :p
I think I'll read the rest as long as Atobe gets punished for kissing Tezuka. :p
| Patcher chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
This looks really, really interesting! "D It looks like this plot is really delicious! "D I look forward to the next update "D
| Shinrin94-XIII chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
| vierblith chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
Hehe. This is interesting and I'll wait for the rest of the fic. _
| darkmage009 chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
If Atobe is in this fic then I'll be looking forward to more.