Reviews for Work in Progress
StrawberryShockPineAppleLove chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Wo-ow...It was amazing...

I loved it a lot, honestly. It's incredibly sexy...Especially the beginning. Shikamaru was just so darn appealing and, well, arrogant. My favorite line was this:

"Shikamaru," he repeated. "My name. Remember it." A raw need filled his command, and she can only nod in compliance. "I want you to get my name right…" he surged up and over her, "…and outrageously loud."

Made me squeal like a fangirl. :) The whole thing.
RatedXXX chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
beautiful. just beautiful. i hope that this wasn't the end of it. i would like to read more of this.
0.o chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Man you fail so hard. -.-

07 update? I'll send you CASH to finish this!
zehn chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
This is good; really, really good. Great starting, and great style.

I added your story to my favorites/alerts.
Moon-Diva chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
I can tell this'll be a good story! Please continue writing, I can't wait to read what happens next!
rookie chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
i can't wait for you to update this fic :)
tinabobina chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Uh-oh. Total Grey's Anatomy moment (if you don't watch it, I am talking about the very first episode where the man the main character sleeps with turns out to be a doctor at the hospital she is going to work at). Can't wait for your update.
ClubSauce chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Update soon! It's not too often when the storyline is the most interesting thing in an M rater fic. Awesome job!
xnalu chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Ooh, This should be interesting. :D

Great writing style, by the way.
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
Nice, do update soon!
Inelegant chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
Two Words. Love It. Update! You are an amazing writer D
coconutmandarin chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
This sounds intriguing...
Temari.fl chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
GREAT START! :) cant wait for update!
Ferb O. Oche chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
wow! i really love it!

so original! i love your idea!

update soon!
Shadeehue chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Interesting beginning, it looks promising I look forward to seeing more )
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