|Reviews for Whole again|
| Wense chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
Omg, this is great :) . Really interesting. Cant wait to read the 3rd chapter ;)
| a Happy Psychosis chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Aw. This is the best "Ash comes back after slaying a dragon" story I've ever read! Awesome!
| MoonsilverTwilight chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
it's good, but where did ridel come from? i thot mare's last name was carter!
| Obsequious101 chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
*sigh* ah i loved it! Ash and Mare were always my favorite couple yay! Nice writing, it was really cute
| BlueSea14 chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I liked this a whole lot! Great job!
| thee-dark-enchantress chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
aww how cute.i loved was so sweet and yet done,going straight to my favs page!
| blackhairdye chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Aw that was so cute!
| Izzy chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Dat was fantastic plz do some more one shots!
| Drowning Rooster chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
aw! that was sweet. and v funny.
if you have time will you check out my NW (ash/ml) fic?
| Quennethe chapter 1 . 3/19/2002
I really really enjoyed this fic. Gave me a warm tingly feeling... that kind of closer l.j . has decided to deny us. I'm adding you to my favorite authors and supremely hope that I will have enough time to read yur other stories.
Good Luck with writing! You're a very good author. (I also enjoyed the You know you've been reading l.j. too much thing)
| Yui-mag chapter 1 . 9/15/2001
Oh my god! You must write more! IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! WRITE MORE! AND LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU DO!
Total Mary-Lynnette and Ash fan!
| sarah chapter 1 . 9/13/2001
its soooooo cuuuuteeeee but a little short...r u gonna write another 1?
| jiana weasley chapter 1 . 9/10/2001
i love this story its great
i was wondering if u could please please please do me a favoure i live in scotland and i can only get 9 of the books i was wondering if you could e mail me a list of all of the nightworld books as im dieing to find out if theres more for me to read once again i love this story ash is my favourite character well him and keller so please keep writing
| Jackalyn chapter 1 . 9/9/2001
| Magelet1 chapter 1 . 9/9/2001
That's so cute!