|Reviews for Naruto: the first wizardnin|
| DonPJuan chapter 2 . 10/11/2011
it's a shame that this fic hasn't been updated in a few years now.
| Raj8 chapter 2 . 12/28/2008
good job so far
| GhostRein chapter 2 . 9/11/2008
PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 2 . 5/12/2008
Awesome chapter update soon.
| T. E. Rankin chapter 2 . 4/2/2008
cool story, and mindflayers are based of of Cthulhu right?.
Please update soon!
| lady Alexas chapter 2 . 1/18/2008
| scione chapter 2 . 1/18/2008
you made a very fine chapter cant wate to read more.
| Gone and forgoten chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
So... Is this gunna be a harem fic! BTW, i like your writting style!
| the DragonBard chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
So, Naruto is a D&D-style wizard, as well as a ninja? Heh, combine the two and you have very few weaknesses.
I'd suggest making the spells (if you haven't already) work like this:
Cantrips and First level spells are equivalent to E or Low D rank
Second and Third level spells D rank
Fourth and Fifth level spells C rank
Sixth and Seventh level spells B rank
Eighth and Ninth level spells are A rank
and Epic would be S rank.
| the DragonBard chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Rough, and a few grammer errors (it's Bunshin, not Bushin) but on the whole, not bad.
| Bobboky chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
| Gaurdian9641 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
good start keep it up
| Lloyd Neruameshi chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
| scione chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
and happy new year good start.
| A.D. Sargent chapter 1 . 12/25/2007