Reviews for Pretty Little Family
skyelar chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
thanks for the happier ending.I still get sad when thinking of sweeney todd though. every time that i read an alternate ending it almost makes me cry because i remember the real story though;makes alot more sense than others i've read
marlicious chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
I only have two criticisms:

1. I doubt Lucy would magically become sane upon seeing Benjamin... or Sweeney, either way...

2. I don't think, no matter how much she may hate him, Johanna would actually kill the Judge, nor do I think that Sweeney would want his daughter to commit murder.

Other than that, I liked it. It was a good story, and I love Sweeney fics where there is a somewhat happy ending. XD
TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
Ok.

Over all, this was pretty good.

I only have a few criticisms. One, I don't think Lucy would become magically sane once she found Ben (Or Sweeney, if you will). Also...I don't know, the whole feel of the story was hard to interpret for me.

But that's just me. Overall, it was a great idea and good story. You also had good vocabulary to make it seem real.