Reviews for bright eyes
red.masenko chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
this is so good! i cant believe i havent reviewed for it. i love narutos character in this. you made him so 'in character' for a lack of a better term well done
Sienna Maiu chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
"He hadn’t been able to find just the right gift for Sasuke this year—after all, he’d wondered, what does one give the girl who has everything?"

I can't tell if this is a typo, or if Naruto is making fun of Sasuke :P

Oh but I loved it though. It's too bad that my mind is so tired as to take things too literally.

lots of Christmas fics, eh?
extraordinaire chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Holy wow! That was so cute and funny! Great job!
Spazztasticle chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
xD This is too awsome. xD Gah! Petrified is a bad word for that though! xO but you have to be a huge pervert to get it xD
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
...*cackles* I like this one...

I'd almost feel sorry for Sasuke. Except, he's probably enjoying this (and just won't admit it).

"The girl looked up from where she was biting Sasuke’s hand in an effort to make him let go of her mouth. Naruto squinted.

Was he—was that sick pervert enjoying it?"

...That scared me...(Sasuke, you are a really depreived person. What has Orchimaru been teaching you for two years?)

...

Meh. (...Seriously, I might have to avoid FFN for a while. My little tiny seed of jealousy is GROWING. AND I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO STOP IT.

...

especially as I feel bad for being jealous.

...

*sigh* I need chocolate...)

/\_/\

(pq)

(")*(")
Ribs On The Run chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Ah, I was cackling along with Naruto as well. And my mouth just seems to automatically morph itself into a grin for the time being - I can't stop it!

/The girl looked up from where she was biting Sasuke’s hand in an effort to make him let go of her mouth. Naruto squinted.

Was he—was that sick pervert enjoying it?/

That was probably the what set me off in terribile fits of half mad giggles and cackling. And it seems that Sakura is more in control of herself than she seemed to be...
bobalina chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
I cannot repress giggles. Hehe. Keep writing!

Toodles,

bobalina
yumi-maki chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Excuse me while I try to stop cackling. Oh, Sasuke, you gotta love him. Why does he try so hard not to care?

This fluff, although I don't think it's really fluff, is just what I need after a hard, I mean, a relaxing, I mean, a bad, eh, who am I kidding? every day if I could!
shewhogoesblah chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Haha... Poor Sasuke!
Artsysmiles chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
me thinks the sasuke doth protest too much.
reflecting chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
hahahahahha XDXD omfg that was just PRICELESS hahaha XD omg poorpoor Sasuke -cough- not. anyhow, well written and very amusing! good job!
Newbie GK chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
I found the dialogue in the beginning to be an interesting way to introduce the setting and the characters. Also I liked seeing Naruto's interpretation of the events around him like "He was too busy being (aroused)petrified." It added a lot of humor to the piece.
bell.esque chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
ZOMG.

Anne, I love the crack! a;lkjfljlkdjkljk

Thank you for bringing such amazing writing to the world. XD
AlbertaxRose chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE IT! SO funny, one of the best christmas gifts Sasuke has probably ever got.
Scarlett Sometimes chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
haha, cute yet sexy!
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