|Reviews for This is NOT business!|
| Zee de la Valliere chapter 2 . 5/31/2012
First i just wanna say that i ABSOLUTELY love ur Disclaimer note. Its sooo cute. Second plz plz plz continue with the story. Dont leave them hanging there! I eyd love to read more
| 329329 chapter 2 . 2/25/2009
please update soon i love this story...
| DevianceIsBliss chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
I've only read the first chapter so far and I am impressed! Very well written! I'll definitely be reading on :)
| linalove chapter 2 . 10/9/2008
This is lovely!Please update soon!
| nightwolf2391 chapter 2 . 9/20/2008
OMG! o come on u hav got to bring fred back around b4 its 2 l8 plz? this is a gr8 fic so plz plz plz write the next chapter soon
| MissDepp4eva chapter 2 . 8/31/2008
aw so sad : (
i srsly love this story so pleasse update
I can't wait to see what happens
| MissDepp4eva chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
I know you've already posted the second chapter to this, and I"ll reaview that one too, But i jsut want you to know I lvoe this story! The characters are perfect and I love the story line!
| tiswillard chapter 2 . 7/15/2008
E! You wrote chapter two! NOW, I think you should work towards the goal of chapter three, four, eight. Or how many ever you want to write, lol. Anyway, this chapter was really good and I can't wait for some more. Because I think something interesting's gonna happen. -cough-
| wholockedfan13 chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
aw I waited like amost eight months for this it's to short! More please!
| PirateEbony chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
| tiswillard chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
This was great. I like how you focus on the emotions of both Fred and Mary. Oh and you have enough reviews to continue now, lol.
| PirateEbony chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
aw love this :D
update soon :)
| starsword chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
*looks all over the place*
Where's the rest? You can't leave it there! Please update! Please!
This was so good, it's really well written and really believable as well. I just wish this had actually happened in the movie! I was so upset when he died at the end and he wouldn't go to her! Damn man! Too hot for his own good.
Please update, I can't wait to read more.
Ciao for now
| Warbringer670 chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Great story, love it, u have got to write more plz :)
| crunchySHINAgal chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I liked that a lot! I wanna hear more!