Reviews for Unpeeled Fruit
ae2000x chapter 1 . 11/27/2019
oh I absolutely LOVE THIS
BendyPen chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
Hot stuff!
caandlelit chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
so great :))))))
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
omg! this makes me so so sooo happy! thanks a million for writing this!
Aster Knight Sapphire chapter 1 . 4/11/2017
I loved this so much! And the constant friendly insults and comebacks! The only thing was that it was pretty difficult at times to tell who was speaking, but I loved it!
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
This was epic.
Cookies chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
WHOOPS There goes my aching heart and can we all just mutually agree that this is one of the best written becoming-friends story there quite possibly is?
Squibble the WhovianBreadstick chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
I likes it!
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Ha! XD I loved this! Great job.
eeriely chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
"Told you and—he's still looking at her! It's because of that skimpy two piece F ire Nation thing! She just needs to take it off."


"…uh, I mean, er, not like that, just, i t's not what I meant and…"

"You're sick."

*facepalm* That must of been ... awkward . Great story and excellent banter!
theAsh0 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
hahaha! so cool.
penguin sledding chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
That was beautiful. I applaud you for somehow managing to make a hilarious fic with impeccable grammar all while staying in character. Keep writing; you're awesome at it. xD
Requiem17 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I died when I read this:

"Hello, my name's Sokka. I snore like an elephant, make revolting noises when I eat, lack a sense of humor, and have a head in the shape of a butt. My hobbies include eating, sleeping, and hunting like a wimp. As an added bonus, I also make up lies about my nonexistent sister, Katarina."

You killed me. The laughter...
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Two teenaged boys who have so little and yet so much in common... Well done!
it's simply me chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I LOVE this. I loved the interactions between the two boys, and I've been looking through pages for something like this. This is the ONLY one that nails it. Seriously, not another zuko-sokka friendship fic comes close! I also loved the pace of this story, and of course, the dialogues. Really well done.
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