Reviews for It's Always the Quiet Ones
Guest chapter 7 . 7/20/2016
oh my god Sirius is so stupid! the bloke behind Snivellus is him and Remus promise not to tell him that he fancied him! i had to try so hard not to yell at my tablet in frustration while reading this. ur such a good writer tho! and u were pretty good at thinking up this riddle
blacknblu30 chapter 9 . 6/16/2015
What a cute little story, made me laugh!
SuiGaa chapter 9 . 5/6/2015
This could have been T, but I've read it twice now so its good either way.
HopelessDragon chapter 8 . 1/25/2015
"I promised the bloke I like that I would not tell you I fancy him"

I JUST NOW saw what you did there. Funny.
padfoot chapter 9 . 12/10/2013
Great plot and good grammar. A bit fast paced and sometimes it's hard to get a grip on when and what is happening, but it's an enjoyable story. Sometimes it gets confusing to follow, for example when it says that Sirius hadn't told anyone about his rules of conduct, causing Remus to be confused when they're mentioned, but previously and also later on in the story Remus quotes one of the rules, so it makes that fact quite contradictory.
It's also hard to follow Remus' lies about fancying Sirius etc, and it doesn't really make sense that Remus says Sirius already knew he was gay as he walked in on him in the shower, because it isn't said what Remus was masturbating over, and the situation of Sirius walking in on him doesn't have anything to do with either of their sexualities, so that part is also confusing.

Plot holes and hard to follow conversations aside, you have good grammar and characterization and it wasn't a bad read.
4701rose chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
Oh, dear, sweet cheesecake! I had a smile on my face the whole time! You have excellent grammer, humor and evil. Loved it!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 9 . 10/13/2013
Ahahaha awww this fic was great. So funny and witty and sweet and lovely.
ginnypotter1596 chapter 9 . 9/23/2013
Yes I was expecting something more graphic! At least write the kiss! Geez...
RosesAreForever23 chapter 9 . 3/3/2013
I thought this was a delightfully funny and interesting story! I must have annoyed my family at least a hundred times with all the times I laughed while reading this. Really, it was great! I couldn't have asked for more :D
Beloved-Soulless chapter 9 . 9/10/2011
sleepynightvale chapter 9 . 4/13/2011
My oh my. This was really good! Great job. I love Sirius' point of view in this story.
cookie mistress chapter 9 . 3/18/2011
VERY cute! lovin it!
EpicFail94 chapter 9 . 2/6/2011
oh my god LOVED the ending!
AmazonWariorPrincess chapter 9 . 11/4/2010
Heheheh! This was way cute! I actually loved the abrupt ending! Great job! :D
Jessarie chapter 9 . 10/29/2010
that was cute
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