|Reviews for Always Sundown|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
That's so sad, but keep going! I really want to see what'll happen. I seriously can't explain in you do us all a HUGE favor and finish all the books that you are making? Love ya!
| JeNeParlentPasVraimentFrancais chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
bwah hah hah love it! Now, I'm gonna let you play with it until they get back together, so take youre time. I worte a Bella-Edward-broke-up fic and all I got were "make em get back 2gether!" dont listen!
| VampsMoonAngel chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
I think you should keep them together though may I suggest that when Edward leaves that he gos and try's to find Jacob to help Bella? What do you think? Or do you just want me to but out?
| emmettlover0o1 chapter 2 . 4/7/2008
OMG poor edward aw im like crying! continue please...*sobs*
| daisyatomic chapter 2 . 3/5/2008
Wow. That was good. A total reverse on the canon. Keep up the good work :D.
| alice and edward cullen chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
ZOMG im soo stupid. ahaha i somehow read chapter two before chapter one? hahaLOL
but OMG NO!
GET A GRIP ON YOURSELF BELLA!
EDDWWAARRD ISS THE ONE,
repeat after me:
omg i really love this story, although i HATE it at the exact same time.
its like one of those addictive soap operas where terrible things always happen but you just cant seem to stop watching incase something positive actually happens...
UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!
and please please make it be good.
for me? haha D
| alice and edward cullen chapter 2 . 3/4/2008
-sharp intake of breath- -dies-
-sobs- this..cant.. be.
omg this story is so bad. but really good at same time.
haha dont take it the wrong way you are an amazing writer and all but OMG THE PLOT? -dies again-
ahaha its just that im strictly team vampire.
| Ecilpse chapter 2 . 1/5/2008
Eh, normally I wouldn't read things like these. Everyone seems far too melodramatic to be realistic. Unless you're dilberately doing a J&B story, I think it would be better to stick to Bella's character. She wouldn't put Edward through that, and at the end of Eclipse, she realized and accepted the price she would pay to become a vampire-and in that price was her and Jacob's relationship. If you're sticking to cannon, Bella would probably act with acceptance and scattered tears, but not all out, woe-is-me-my-life-is-over angst like she did in New Moon. I'm probably to baised to see all the good things, and I apologize for that. But like the Shadowed Veil, your prose is clean and crisp, and your grammar is good. 7/10. I think I like the Shadowed Veil better. I think I didn't enjoy the story as much as I could've because I've seen this plot so many times, but that doesn't mean other people will love it. Keep up the good work, and I'll add you to my alert list so I can keep track of your updates. I'll read as long as you keep writing.
| die for me chapter 2 . 1/3/2008
no... Bella should go back to Edward... Please! Maybe she could try to find jacob or something, but i still prefer ExB. But, it's your story, you decide how this will end :D
| Satellite Falling chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
Keep adding! Right now! Awesome
| GoThMo0nAnGeL chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
Oh my fuck dat iz so sad, i love diz story, but i stil fink Bella sould be with Edward, Great story plz continue soon
| Bella Sparkled chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
You haven't updated in a while.
Update or I will hide in your room and torment you at night.
I'm getting impatient.
&& you wouldn't like me when I'm angry.
Ok... I'm not scary I'm just bored out of my mind. GOSH! UPDATE or i'll cry.
| Palendrome chapter 2 . 12/30/2007
that is so sad! i hope that bella gets better! and the way you write is amazing you write with such emotion it blows me away! keep posting more i'll gladly read and review if you post soon! thanx for the awesome sad story
| Airi4264 chapter 2 . 12/30/2007
I read your review on my soon to be story so I decided to stop by. I'm a bit surprized because I always thought i liked the Bella and Jacob pairing just a little bit better because of his cocky attitude. But when I saw her talk to Edward like that I hated it. So you have made me realize that firstly I love your story and please continue, and secondly that I actually do like the Edward and Bella pairing just a teeny tiny bit better.
| Miserable At Best chapter 2 . 12/30/2007
Yay the second chapter! Keep it up! Update today! Don't you dare wait 'till tomorrow!