Reviews for While You Were Sleeping
theCurlyFlame chapter 2 . 1/23/2008
aww, this is cute ;)

*DN
crzybookluvrchick4017 chapter 2 . 1/23/2008
wonderful
yayme2012 chapter 2 . 1/11/2008
This was a cute little two-shot.

When you said finance, did you mean fiance?

Btw, I like how your scenes are with a purpose. Like Bella doesn't just randomly become a slut.

With Practicing and the Talk(and this story too), instead of senseless porn, it's a really good, awesome story.
wontgrowsup32 chapter 2 . 1/1/2008
Aaw that was so sweet. And the fact that you make even perfect Edward selfconcious, gives the rest of us hope.
29Isabella chapter 2 . 12/31/2007
I like it. I hate jake... ugh he is so selfish ... can't stand him...anyway, love your story! :)

- Isabella
RadioactiveBlood chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Totally amazing!

Please, continue soon!
Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 12/28/2007
Very sweet, I enjoyed it!
bloody ampersand chapter 2 . 12/28/2007
That didn't really need to be rated M, it was barely a T...

It was cute, though!

bloody
alwaysgone chapter 2 . 12/27/2007
Really good. Looking forward to more updates.
alwaysgone chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Really good 1st chapter. Off to chapter 2.
theonlyoneleft chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
So cute. I love it! :D
heartsandroses chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
i'm sad that this is over, but i really enjoyed it while it lasted.
GtotheAtotheBBY chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
That was beautiful! Good Job!
TillWeOverdoseXO chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
good begginning

hope to read more.

update
My-Bella chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
I like it. Can't wait for Bella's POV.
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