Reviews for The New Age of the Shinobi
He Who Rules With an Iron Hoof chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
lol i told this to another person who was very similar

you should delete this story

the sad fact is that you are basically trying to write about yourself in the narutoverse (proof is your profile name) and the sad fact is that NO ONE CARES they came to read about NARUTO not Xandros or w/e the hell his name is

you have talent but it is wasted on crap like this