Reviews for Your Hearts At Sea
Guest chapter 3 . 4/11/2014
If you want to be a writer you need to learn not only to spell but also how to properly format sentences. You repeat yourself far too many times and sadly this makes you sound, for lack of a better term, like a dimwit.
ThePagesFlyBy chapter 17 . 6/15/2013
This is a really cute story. And it has so much potential! I know you wrote it years ago, but you might want to consider having it edited. It's a little hard to read. I really like it though!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/22/2012
great about the children?
Praise Allah chapter 16 . 7/30/2010
It was okay... but you really need to edit it. There are hundreds of spelling errors, grammar mistakes, and wrong words used... honestly, it was painful to read, and would be much more enjoyable to read if it was edited :)
MrsJamesPotter1 chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
god

what

is

it

with

lily

and

getting

hit

in

the

head?

too

lazy

to

sign

in,

MrsJamesPotter1
That'sMyCue chapter 17 . 6/19/2010
awww, the last part was sweet! I like it! especially with Draco around! The story was nice! Keep up the good work! :)
xXMiss.BrightSideXx chapter 17 . 10/11/2009
hey! that was a totally wicked stroy! i loved it! i liked the twin idea!
R E Z I A chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
This sounds considerably like a revised(your) version of Wind and Waves by HeroOfTheCastleOfMarble,but I'm sure it'll turn into you're own plot,which I'm sure will be certainly ingeniously entertaining. :)
reviewer-only chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
I like it...I really like it...:)
reviewer-only chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Great Work... :)
blueyblonde chapter 17 . 2/9/2009
i love it
Jammya chapter 16 . 2/5/2009
Aw! This story is really cute I like it! :]
lol chapter 3 . 11/7/2008
this is realy good
DracoMalfoysMusse chapter 10 . 10/5/2008
Hi one problume

I love Draco Malfoy so much but... can u please keep the time real Lily was born the same year as narcissa...
Apocalyptic Carnage chapter 17 . 8/29/2008
that was so great!

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