Reviews for Family Time
TerraClearwater chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
The writing itself was sketchy at times, but other than that was good. I always thought Riku was related to Kadaj in some fashion! You know, all silver-heads...:).
Reviewwiz chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
This fic was not good. Your fic continually switches from first person to third person point of view. This makes the fiction hard to read. When you say "I hate my brothers" and then in the next paragraph, you say "Riku was commanded to open the door. Riku hates his brother". Do you see how the sentences switched from first person to third person? This is not O.K. Please re-read your fic and fix your point of view. Your work is confusing. It is hard to follow the plot. In actuality, it is hard to even tell what is happening. Reading your fic is like watching a fuzzy television; I can see the figures moving, but I only receive half of the message. There is no way for me to tell what’s going on. I advise you to re-write this, from the very first word to the last.
Suicide In A Bottle chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
lol! I feel bad for Riku but man if that wasn't funny.
kingdomhearts222 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Riku is Atlantian! How cool! I can see Milo and Kida being his parents...but then again I like the KH motif of family being jack-squat. But if family was important, Kida and Milo would be kickass...But I'd like to go to their world...

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Hehe...anyways! Kadaj is a kiddie molester! Roxas should stay in Sora until Kadaj leaves...but I have a feeling that Kadaj will probably push Roxas out.
xxx chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Milo? Kida? i actually thought that they were OC's until i read the other reviews. lol luv this 1-shot and i guess the other blond that Kadaj is fond of is Cloud?
Ghost Writer no. 3 chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
This story amuses me more then it should. And it amuses me greatly.
Femisis chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Hah, funny. Great job.
BakaChan003 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
I loved this xD and...you put in Milo and Kida from the Atlantis movie! I love that
Tickle Me Rainbow chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
I ish confused

Yet I like it!
Riana1 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Milo- MILO, that means Kida and Riku is a bonified prince and will have his hands full with his brothers macking on both his best friends.