Reviews for Extinguished Flame |
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![]() ![]() Where did Jubilee and Rogue go? When is John going to make a move? Why hasn't he questioned what the hell happened to Bobby? Please update. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful work. I hope that you are still updating this story. Thank you so much for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this :) I love how things are developing :D Update when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha That was great. This is seriously weird too... I think I want you to continue... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow haha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... I desperately want to know what happens... however I have this awful feeling that once do I'll be feeling really sorry for John. Anyway, love what you have so far and cant wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) This Is Great I Would Love To Read More. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() -drools at the image of Gambit-I love meh some Cajun- oh right, review. -cough- Ah, I like the twist you put in there. Update another chapt soon! " |
![]() ![]() ![]() intersting turn of events great chapter keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! -takes out work whip- |
![]() ![]() ![]() another great chapter keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() O... The end of this chapter was nice. Well, the whole thing was nice, just the end especially so. Rogue kickin ass on a motorcycle! YES! Lol. Thanks for this chapter, I loved it! I hope the next update comes soon! -SkyRogue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gha! I was going to leave two reviews, one for the first chapter and another for the last. But I have to say that I LOVED the Gambit appearance! Once you hear "mon ami" you know it's on. Anyway. This was great. Jeza is a ho-o! Glad Pyro wasn't interested. He could do better, i.e he could do Rogue... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! One word that comes to mind when I read this is 'effortless'. You have a knack for building tension, for telling a story that's vivid and engaging. And it's great how Pyro's personality comes through, without you having to use any dialogue. You've got skills, dude! I really, really like this... |