Reviews for Second Love
thisisallterriblehELP chapter 5 . 1/22/2010
awthat was sdad hirari.

y she nono be lovey-dovey with demetree?
thisisallterriblehELP chapter 4 . 1/22/2010
no lol her eyether

y hirari?

y?
thisisallterriblehELP chapter 3 . 1/22/2010
no lol frum skimmimg hirari.

y?
thisisallterriblehELP chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
exietment lol
thisisallterriblehELP chapter 2 . 1/22/2010
lol
Silent Shootting Star chapter 2 . 8/17/2009
Good
Qu0thTheRavenNeverm0re chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
fantastic use of metaphors and stuff...youre great w/ words! the only thing is that alexa sounds a bit childish, but she's supposed to be like fourteen.
gaeaapril07 chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
i like he ending is quaint.
gaeaapril07 chapter 4 . 5/7/2008
i really like your story. hope you can add more chapters as soon as you can.

-GaeaApril07
DivinelyLoved chapter 4 . 4/13/2008
Aw...cute! You had very good voice in this chapter.
Queen Twix chapter 3 . 3/24/2008
Wow. Your writing is beautiful.

Although, you maybe need to do a quick spell check.

Other than that, though, it's great!

So, what happens next! :)
The Hopeful Violinist chapter 3 . 3/20/2008
LONDON? Now THAT'S unexpected, yet strangely intriguing... PLEASE FINISH IT! I am so glad to find another who has read the wonderful books of Elyon! I nearly went insane when I saw it on here! *big puppy eyes* Pwease finish? Pwease? I BEG YOU! PLEASE FINISH!

Reverend Lady Sasha the Perplexed of Longer Interval (a.k.a. Countess Sasha the Weird)
DivinelyLoved chapter 3 . 2/25/2008
I love it! Just one question, is she in the modern day London? I can't wait for more!
DivinelyLoved chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
Wow, I liked it! I think you have excellent word choice!
DivinelyLoved chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
I loved it! And I'm so happy I'm not the only person writing in this category now, I was so sad that I was the only one who had posted anything for Elyon. I can't wait for I.
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