Reviews for Harry Potter's Promise
Paegan chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Loved it. As ppl said before, plausible concept, excellent delivery and decent fleshing out of Ginny's character as an actual person ( a little shallow with the whole "Harry must have the perfect wife" bit, but then chick get strange when they're emotional). Although here's a fresh little wrackspurt to wrap yer mind around - if Harry had died would Ron have had to do similar by Ginny? - ICK!
Debbster21 chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Looooved it. I like the note at the bottom, though, since your writing a harem type fic now and its awesome!
dennisud chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Wow you made a realistic Trio fic and with the girls NOT having a bisexual relationship! Wish more were like this as I think Harry hermione and Luna would be a good combo... and I'm writing one with that trio too!

bookivore chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
This is cute, and just the sort of thing Ron would goof up.
carolyn jinn chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
This is a different sort of story but...

I liked it lot.

Congratulations. :)
Phil Boswell chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I'm wondering whether you remember writing that closing note and are ROFLing a little right now ;-)
Cloud Dancer1014 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
-Interesting thought. It does make for a lot of sense! Besides, I have little to no doubt that all versions of the Wizarding World contain that law, despite the monogamous views of some writers. Remember, pure blood males rule it; if there was such a law in existance, what man would take it down?

Happy writing!
BocMage chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Amazing story, very well written and a tasteful M. I like adult stories, you do it with finess and a plot that puts to shame many of those that are just junk smut. Any recommendations?

Looking forward to reading over your other works,

Good luck and good work

dad123 chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I thought that was a bit strange and different, but very readable and an interesting ending.
Nights Silhouette chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
A good story, keep it up.
Marj123 chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
Nice story, though I'd say that 3 in bed together is not kinky, it's actually very nice indeed.
TheHard chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Nice story, I liked the way it ended...

Why did Hermione don't want more childrens in that point of the story? maybe she still feels bad about the situation...
Cenright chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Interesting take on the story, backed by a good explanation. Well done.
duskglow chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Not the first story I've seen with this principle, but probably one of the tamer ones, actually. There was one with ginny and harry and luna...
Silver Warrior chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
semi-funny, but real neat. Ron certainly messed things up in death, didn't he? He's gonna be very sheepish when he greets those two witches when they move on to the next great adventure.
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