Reviews for Pillowtalk
justawritier chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
very cute! It's really in cannon to R/hr too : )
Pandanoia chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
aww, this is adorable. very fluffy

but of course, it's all for nothing because ron will just end up dying and getting buried on an elementary school football field.

don't worry, his daughter Maria will continue the legacy ;D
swim0angel0belle chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
aw ]
mustardgirl1128 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
AW! Loved it! soo cute and sad, great job!
Ainulin chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Woo Sarah!
weasleyismyprince chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
that was brilliant! so cute and

L.Lockheart chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
I really liked this!

it was supper cute, fluffy and totally in canon to Ron-Hermione relation ship. I really like how they talked about harry the way they did, because now that i think about it, it makes sense.

you did a good job on this!
CarsonRae chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
very nice

i like it
jenn chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
that was very sweet and romantic, i loved it
malteselover chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Aw...How sweet! I am an absolute sucker for Ron and Hermione moments. Nicely done though. It's written very well. I liked how "his hand convinced her," at the end. Very touching. However, you may want to through it a slight dash of "Ron humor" somewhere in here. He seems almost too serious compared to the character he is portrayed as in the book. And at some points, you may want to add a touch of awkwardness to the conversation. Afterall, Ron's still new to this. But the story is great with or without it. The title is cute to. All in all, nice work.
Princessenr1 chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
oh wow! lovely!

great writing, keep it up!

Moonprincess92 chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Aw, not so cheesy, but simply RHr at the same time. Doubley awesome. Shot. D
blackolives10 chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
I love how gallant Ron is in this story. :)
maddikinz940 chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
aw so cute
CowahBull chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
I like it. Hermione DID seem a little OOC...not much but...

very good
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