Reviews for Pain of Betrayal
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
Who else feels like it was Kakashi, even though it would go against his character? Maybe he was drunk or one of Iruka's comrads on that mission got jealous and put Kaka in a ganjutsu? Maybe he was controlled by Oro or Atkatsuki, the former for taking away Sasu and the latter to break him.
fairyninja73 chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
nooo u can't just leave it off here...
please please please please (i don't know how many please but..) please continue the story...
u can't just leave it off like this...noooo :'(
u started it off really well... now the rest of the story would be very nice
solitare1 chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Is this a rewrite? I'm sure I've read this before somewhere.
Moon Dog 05 chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
Plz update soon
Kurama's Foxy Rose chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Kakashi's the most obvious choice for the whodunnit, since the pairing is so common. No one would ever suspect Yamato or Gai though.
Takeru1996 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
PLEASE CONTINUE! I just realized I'm probably going to say this for most if not all of your uncompleted stories/drabbles, so if you don't mind please continue it.
ShirukuKage chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Wow...that's so sad...I really don't have anything else to say. I'm sorry for Iruka but I'm more sorry for Naruto, hasn't he suffered enough without losing the only one who truly loved and believed in him.

Well, if the most popular pairings of Iruka are any indication my best guess would be Kakashi but I could also see it being Guy/Gai (he seems obsessive enough) plus if he was in a previous relationship with Kakashi maybe he was jealous. I suppose that it could also be Ibiki, though I don't know his rank I could see him being cruel enough.

I could also see two other scenarios playing out:

1)-The murderer was Sasuke and he wanted to make Naruto suffer and so took Iruka from him.

2)-The murderer was actually a random villager or ninja who had a grudge against either Naruto or Iruka's lover.

I do hope that you will put up a sequel someday to resolve this situation and I also really hope that you'll bring revenge upon the murderer, hopefully with the Konoha 12 doing it. Great job so far, the story was very emotive and suspenseful. Keep up the good work.
Zoey lilyanne chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
AHHHHHH! NOT IRUKA! *weeps in a corner* it better not be Kakashi! *puppy dog eyes* we need Dolphin-chan! update soon!
YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Okay, make me a frigging ninja so I can sit in the backround and laugh as Naruto kicks some ass! Siriously, I am, like, uber pissed. And, yes, even though I'm pissed, I still want to know who done it. And even though I hate it, I love it. I got the sence from the part about Naruto screaming of him knowing what it was like being without anyone, gaining what he wanted most, then having it ripped from him and knowing that the pain of being alone will just be that much worse for knowing such love and care. All that from a few lines, right? So please up-date, cause I don't care if it was friggin GAARA (I love him, btw) I wanna see Naruto and Sasuke stomp the f***** into the ground.


saphire jasmine chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
why did u remove the hand job?
Nell1994 chapter 2 . 12/11/2009
update please
callietitan chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
update please pretty please with ramen on top? i had a feeling it was kakashi... damn. hurry up and update, you're awesome!
xBeautifullyxxShatteredx chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
zomfg! I love this story so far! hopefully you update..? :D
Spiritwalker36 chapter 2 . 3/21/2009
I love a suspense... *sniff not Kakashi he wouldn't...would he? I guess I have to wait and see eh?
xXx Divine Goddess xXx chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
Wow, I can't believe you killed off Iruka. But I think that is the perfect person to kill off that will affect Naruto so deeply. I bet that it was Kakashi who done it, isn't it? He just seems like the type to do it.
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