Reviews for An Uzumaki Amongst the Dunes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love the omake |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crap death for a crap person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing stopping a quick kunai to his head right now. He’s already been sentenced. He is as weak as a stronger than an athletic civilian. |
![]() ![]() That was really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cote Jasmines |
![]() ![]() good story. the last part made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story. I hope you are still writing stuff ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() what type of fucking shit is this . temari could have just killed sasuke when she reached him. and they could have exexuted him when the punishment was decided but no they just had to wait for someone to interfere. and every fight is like you making naruto look like a weakling .i wasted my time reading this trash |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly have to put this as my favourite naruto fic. the writing is excellent, the characters act like themselves but still get great development, the story line is magnificent and constantly engaging. this is a perfect fic 100 percent |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sakura is trash. Kakashi is worse than trash...why the hell is he even trying to make up...bullshit man |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean why the fuck is Naruto even being civil to these people. Fuck them and their grandmother. They won't do jackshit if he tell them to just fuck off and not bother him |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah Hiawatha, that's native American lore nice to see that |
![]() ![]() SASUKE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Klller B isn't the first pefect Jinchurkiki and the only Yagura is also a perfect Jinchurkiki but he can't actually summon his tailed beast out the seal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why don't you just take his seed and impregnate it into a woman then kill him or let the Daymio have a say in this |