|Reviews for The Shadowed Veil|
| gerryade.merrygold chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
AWESOME! Keep writing! Very cool plot and details! You sound like a pro.
| VampsMoonAngel chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
Cool story! I hope you write soon.
| my bleeding tears of agony chapter 2 . 9/1/2008
this isnt adding up to the summary
| jaydubb chapter 2 . 8/18/2008
| daisyatomic chapter 2 . 3/5/2008
Hm... Unpredictable. I can't see where this is going. Edward's eyes... it gives the impression that he fed off Bella, or maybe even Charlie... Interesting. Can't wait for the rest.
| alice and edward cullen chapter 2 . 3/4/2008
-looks from left to right- but but wheres edward? -sobs-
im really liking this story though. as much as i hate that dog.
haha cant wait to read the rest )
| alice and edward cullen chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
omg. O what does this mean?
ps: i love your writing style )
it flows so well.
| Emmett-Cullen-Lova-01 chapter 2 . 1/20/2008
please update soon!
Very good story!
| ninavictoria13 chapter 2 . 1/19/2008
nice! update soon please!]
| Ecilpse chapter 2 . 1/5/2008
Hey, you reviewed my story Breathe No More a few days ago and asked me to check out your work, so here I am. :)Thanks for the review, by the way. There's nothing wrong with this story-your prose is crisp and readable, your grammar and spelling are good, with only a few, minor typos (stuff only a grammar nazi like me would notice.) I only have nitpicks-like how Bella went to ask where the Cullens where Edward was, and they seemed not to let to much info out. Bella is part of their family by this point-or this AU and I missed it?-and Edward is a huge part of her life; they would be a lot more open with her, especially Alice, right? Bella would've also probably been more guarded around Jacob, after the events in Eclipse. Other than that, it is a nice, easy read. It is fanfiction, so you can get away with stuff, but if you're trying to stay true to the books, that's just a few things to look out for. I hope you update soon, and I'll go check out your other story. Rating: 7.8/10
| GoThMo0nAnGeL chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
awesome story, plz carry on soon, i so wana see wot happenz, great job!
| Amber is a Jasper's girl chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
plz continue it is really awesome! um... I can't think of anything esle so yeah!
P.S. would you please read and review my story 'til death?
| epic chic chapter 2 . 1/1/2008
I like this story. write soon
| fallen509 chapter 2 . 1/1/2008
only the second chapter and i'm already hooked. i love that you brought Jake back in! (nothing against Edward, of course.)