Reviews for kitsune brothers
Serinity Dawn chapter 25 . 12/23/2013
HELL YEAH GO OMOUI! (I don't know how to spell his name)
Serinity Dawn chapter 17 . 12/15/2013
Holy! Wow what a lemon! LOL. I like the conversations!
Serinity Dawn chapter 8 . 12/13/2013
I noticed in an earlier chapter when Kurenai gave them the next day off she said to meet at like 8 in training ground 14 or something like that you might want to fix that.
yukicrewger2 chapter 10 . 11/6/2013
I think Shiawase has a crush on canon Naruto, or this Naruto... hard to tell
yukicrewger2 chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
you could have also used ashigatsuku which means "to be traced"
DarknessDragon78 chapter 31 . 6/27/2013
This is a really good story I wish there were more of this, because it would suck that the brothers are not reunited together.
Waterbender of the South chapter 6 . 4/25/2012
Feed him to the fangirls . . . Kaoru is evil!

Awesome story, my only concern being run-on sentences. Other than that though it is brilliant, well done, original, and most importantly, non-cliched.


yukicrewger2 chapter 8 . 4/25/2012
I thought gold was "kin"?
yukicrewger2 chapter 5 . 4/25/2012
it is called a hitai-ate
Team Demons chapter 30 . 4/25/2012
Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Sooooooooooonnn Pleaaaasssssssssssssse
TehShadowKitten chapter 31 . 3/11/2012
Nice story good line ups interesting plots not really much to complain about though some day some one has to make a story where naruto dye's Sakura's hair as a prank when she is drunk xD

any ways i say a 8/10 for your story.
Killzone180 chapter 18 . 12/28/2011
I want to know, why the hell are Naruto and his brother the SAME height! There are 6 years apart!
Dragonlord1199 chapter 31 . 12/28/2011
(loud crying in the backgrownd) sniff... sniff please I'm begging you with all I'v got make a sequel PLEASE. O_O (pupy eyes)
Shinzochi chapter 31 . 9/14/2011
That was an awesome story though i think u should have continued it cause while it was a good ending in general it is sad that this story went the way of so many other awesome fics being that the author got bored, got writers block, just stopped writing/updating cause of working on another fic or they just stop writing/updating period, it is just sad that it happens so much, and what's worse is that whenever i start reading a awesome story i always start getting my hopes up that it will be different and sometimes it is, and others i don't know cause they are still ongoing adn then others i end up getting disappointed especially when the author says that they will be continuing and that just have a slight block but end up just moving on to another story
Pointer3109 chapter 31 . 8/31/2011
"I was cast out of heaven for what? Urging Kami-sama to eradicate your filthy kind!"

"With this I'm sure to be allowed back in Kami-sama's grace!"

I assume the "angel" is more than a bit nuts.

Enjoyed it.
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