Reviews for The Bargain for the Whelp
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
sick... but good
ChocolateChipCookie27 chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
My goodness, that was so sad! Poor Jack :(
Vamillepudding chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Though I normally don't ship Jack and Will and I'm not really in Tentacle porn as well - I liked your fic so much that I wished there'd be a sequel :D So yeah, well written, love it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Good story
TreaclyCarcinogen chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Tentacle rape!XD. I really liked this story, it's wonderful
Micheal chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Wow that was verey nice, one of my freinds had told me about this fic, she was so bouncy and happy about it and I decided I should check it out myself, well she was corect on something's, this is a very sexy and well-written Fic, I expect great thing from you and I hope you do well. I love how you capture the hidden feeling jack had and I love the rape :3...don't judge, i for one think this was a verey sexy and verey lurring story and I hope you keep doing this, your simply to good a writer to be passed off as a mere Fanfic author.
Nom nom 3 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
8D luved it, quite detailed, and verey sexy, you my dear are my new favorite. honestly you write fantastic and ou right about one of my fav charecters and fav stories 21 JUMP STREET FTW
AnimeAddict4Life chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
awesome i love fic
Phantasmal Abduction chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Wow...that was, lol slightly sick. But bloody well written.

I like the way you write and I think this is the best written PotC fic I've read. And I'm a 10 year fanfiction vet lol
bunyipbabe chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
wow, you write such amazing Jack-uke(bottom) stuff! I love your work, and I'm always hoping for more!
Youni chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Wow great ! Jones is cruel, I adore that ! :D

It is very really well written, I had really pity for Jack :/
IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Aaw, that was sad but somehow adorable at the same time... :)

~IP~
heartfallen chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Cool story. It was heartbreaking. Great job
Keppiehed chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I like the harshness you lent the situation. You didn't give in and ease up on any of the characters, which is what we, the audience, were hoping for, and not what would've happened. Thanks for a solid piece of work.
Vampiric Phantoms chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Wow ... this one actually has me a little teary-eyed. Poor Jack, and poor Will as well.
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