|Reviews for My World Redone|
| BadChicK247 chapter 12 . 7/28/2009
i thought u were gonn update!its 2009!
| coli narago chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Yes, carlisle's name is pronounced. car-lile. Why don't you watch the movie? By the way, it's an english name. A very old english name. He's from 15th century london.
| bellaklutz2010 chapter 10 . 9/2/2008
Awesome story, I love it! I hope you contnue writing it someday.
| bellaklutz2010 chapter 5 . 9/2/2008
| dawning beauty chapter 12 . 4/18/2008
lauren never looses her hair...ever...I've basically memorized it...and there is no such thing mentioned...sry...please update!
| dawning beauty chapter 9 . 4/18/2008
lol so random
| dawning beauty chapter 8 . 4/18/2008
lol that was kinda unnecessary don't 'ya think?
| dawning beauty chapter 7 . 4/18/2008
ooc is out of cannon. out of character works too...
| dawning beauty chapter 6 . 4/18/2008
I know you've probably already updated past this point, but I have a suggestion on how she could get back to the present. Common sense tells me not to bother posting this idea, but it's the first time I've ever actually come up with anything potentially helpful:
she could WAKE UP! yay! *runs around screaming* Bella fainted! Bella fainted! YAY! (sry, too much ice cream)
| dawning beauty chapter 5 . 4/18/2008
ok k9#, whatever...but i have very little to say...
if you read this all the way to the end, type bananas in your reply
just fyi, if no one reads your author's notes, don't take it as an insult. instead, take into account that they might be too engrossed in your story to read anything else. think about it, if you were reading a totally awesome story (like yours) would you like to read the (no offense) horribly anticlimactic author's note at the bottom if there was another chapter up? I wouldn't...also, same thing w/ reviews, even though it makes every author feel warm & fuzzy inside to get a review telling them that someone read & liked your story, the reader tends to forget this warm & fuzzy feeling when they have stuff to read...
wow, I basically just wrote an essay...it's almost as long as your author's notes! if you actually read this 'till the end type invisible monkeys ate my brother in your reply
jk about monkeys & bananas, but I saw that somewhere in an author's note & thought it fit my point...sort of...
I think I've taken enough of your time now...ttyl
| My Personal Morphine chapter 12 . 3/7/2008
I have it. It is chapter 7 page 154 of New Moon * I barely recognized Lauren. She'd cut off all of her blond, corn-silk hair-now she had a pixie cut so short that the back was shaved like a boy.*
| Eillac chapter 12 . 3/6/2008
It's page 154
| cullenVSblack chapter 12 . 3/6/2008
Lauren never loses her hair - she just changes it when bella is going though her edward withdrawl.
| eszath chapter 12 . 3/6/2008
Stephenie talked about Lauren losing her hair; it wasn't in the books.
| not dead yet chapter 6 . 3/5/2008