Reviews for Second Chances
Reymen chapter 30 . 6/9/2014
Have senbons ever killed anyone either in canon or fanfics? I really think anbu or tsunade Should notice it. Anbu because it is their job. They are the best. And tsunade is The Best medic.
Sode No Shirayuki Ohime-sama chapter 43 . 5/25/2014
I'm in love with this story! I've been reading it for 3 days with only breaks for sleep! I am such an otaku...
QuotidianStories chapter 6 . 5/18/2014
Hi! How are you? I don't want to offend you or you're story, however I'd like to point out that the rate of Reiko's skill development is kind of absurd. Considering that she did come from our world with practically no experience in any sort of combat skills or violence, and basically had no training in chakra control. Now if you would've noticed in the world of naruto, people went to the academy for the many years of their early childhood to master the basic essentials that a ninja needs to know. Children study in the academy for years-Reiko has only been in the naruto verse in like, how many weeks? Sarutobi knows that she comes from our world, right(unless I'm mistaken)? So why would he put a civilian into a team of shinobis anyway? She has practically no experience of being one.
Anywaaaay, other than that I guess she's ok-BUT-I think that you're character is turning into a Mary Sue. Have you ever read a fic with a freaking nice plot just to abandon it because the main character is just too perfect to relate with? She's cute-nothing wrong with that, but please don't make her anymore flawless than that, and then there's the issue of Reiko easily learning ninja techniques that should've taken at least a year to learn-please don't add up another thing to list down in her Mary Sue characteristics. I want to see how this story ends, though of course it would be kind of annoying for me if the main character turns out to be the epitome of perfection in that her whole being pulls down the plot and the story into an annoying Mary Sue sitcom. I must admit, I am finding a hard time of finding a good GaaraxOC fic. I've just recently finished an amazing one-The Obsession by -you should check it out. And I'm craving for more, you know? I'm kind of still reading your fic because of that. I don't hate it, it's actually interesting.
Please,please, please don't make Reiko another Mary Sue .
Cereza101 chapter 65 . 2/2/2014
That sounded like a script from final fantasy 7 advent children.
When tifa is talking to cloud
And when cloud is talking to Rufus...
Eh. Oh well, still an awesome story
XD
draupadi chapter 90 . 10/31/2013
This was a great story. I love it.
Aiedail4eva chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Good so far. You did a good job with connecting the OC to the reader and making the reader feel bad for the OC. I don't KNOW Reiko yet, but it's a good start to getting to know her. The analogy between the cat and Reiko is a nice touch. :) And I am left wondering what the necklace that Sarutobi left is for, which makes me want to continue reading. Good job!
CrystalBud chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
interesting XP
Yaoi-Beloved chapter 63 . 7/10/2013
Aw, I love the sound of Momaru. I wanna see a picture :3
cassie chapter 23 . 7/9/2013
Hey was Noami, Mimi that died? That would make sense since you said she was blond with blue eyes and so was Mimi right?
Guest chapter 8 . 7/9/2013
Ong what's gunna happen! T_T
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Hey! You should put this story on Wattpad! It's a website/app where there are a bunch of free fanfics and stuff and they need for naruto fanfics!
Yaoi-Beloved chapter 54 . 7/6/2013
I may sound sort of stupid. I do agree some criminals do deserve to die, but I also believe some do deserve 2nd chances.

I can't help but think that the way Deidara was treated was alittle too coldly...
anonymous chapter 32 . 7/6/2013
something funny? my music teacher's name is mrs. martin. love your story, your doing great. only on chapter thirty tw, so i can't wait to see what happens between gaara and reiko. sorry if those are misspelled. luv ur story! i recommend some stories by author kylasoulsongalchemist and blueyes110. they both r epic. especially kyla, whose my best friend.
-elvin dragon
Yaoi-Beloved chapter 48 . 7/6/2013
What is that ripping wound that had already occurred twice? I am so confuzzled..
Yaoi-Beloved chapter 43 . 7/6/2013
"If you were trying to make her your mate then you just fucked up but that makes it so much more interesting for me."

I actually like shukaku when he said this cause even HE knew Gaara MESSED UP xD

And I wondered what happened to the stuff panda she had as a kid O_O
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