Reviews for Second Chances
Trash chapter 2 . 9/28
Suicide is when you want to live but it hurts so much that death is your next best bet. (Speaking from personal experience) Don't ever underestimate the pain someone goes through to end it all.
DM chapter 2 . 9/28
Suicide is more like you want to live but it hurts too much to carry on so death is your next best bet. Never underestimate the pain someone went through to make that final decision to end it.
Pepewritermeadow chapter 29 . 8/31
is she the sister or?
BeniTohu chapter 20 . 6/22
An overall good story but,there are some major plot holes. Like what Reiko actually did for training? And why there are so many teams made of shining from different villages?
demonicKitsune2 chapter 15 . 6/21
Just as her story said, Gaara can't kill her.
demonicKitsune2 chapter 5 . 6/21
was that roar actually Gaara in his partial biju transformation?
demonicKitsune2 chapter 4 . 6/21
Okay so theory time.
I think that Reiko when she came into the Naruto universe she took on a new body, one of a young girl who was already dead, because of her switching worlds she cannot remember her past life. BUT she has the memories of the girl whose body she took over and they are just locked away into her subconscious in the form of amnesia.
BTW- great story so far, I've never read a fan fic where it's a combination of- the person remembers none of their old life(or at least will forget all of it), they take the body of someone who has already died by the point of the reincarnation(my theory), and has the memories of another but only in the form of vague familiarity(though she's probably going to regain those memories in time). All of it is so original and interesting, I love it!
Though what I can't figure out is just how the Sandaime Hokage(Sarutobi) even got to her world in the first place, why he was so injured, and how he disappeared.
GetLegsBish-Aiya chapter 1 . 4/3
Know what else isn't good for the kittens? Milk. Seeing as cats are lactose intolerant lol. Really though, I like this beginning. I'll review better in future chapters, promise, but the ache in my finger is telling me it's time to stop typing.
Wolfe chapter 71 . 8/6/2015
10 minutes later...

Wait, Itachi is 32?
Reymen chapter 30 . 6/9/2014
Have senbons ever killed anyone either in canon or fanfics? I really think anbu or tsunade Should notice it. Anbu because it is their job. They are the best. And tsunade is The Best medic.
Sode No Shirayuki Ohime-sama chapter 43 . 5/25/2014
I'm in love with this story! I've been reading it for 3 days with only breaks for sleep! I am such an otaku...
QuotidianStories chapter 6 . 5/18/2014
Hi! How are you? I don't want to offend you or you're story, however I'd like to point out that the rate of Reiko's skill development is kind of absurd. Considering that she did come from our world with practically no experience in any sort of combat skills or violence, and basically had no training in chakra control. Now if you would've noticed in the world of naruto, people went to the academy for the many years of their early childhood to master the basic essentials that a ninja needs to know. Children study in the academy for years-Reiko has only been in the naruto verse in like, how many weeks? Sarutobi knows that she comes from our world, right(unless I'm mistaken)? So why would he put a civilian into a team of shinobis anyway? She has practically no experience of being one.
Anywaaaay, other than that I guess she's ok-BUT-I think that you're character is turning into a Mary Sue. Have you ever read a fic with a freaking nice plot just to abandon it because the main character is just too perfect to relate with? She's cute-nothing wrong with that, but please don't make her anymore flawless than that, and then there's the issue of Reiko easily learning ninja techniques that should've taken at least a year to learn-please don't add up another thing to list down in her Mary Sue characteristics. I want to see how this story ends, though of course it would be kind of annoying for me if the main character turns out to be the epitome of perfection in that her whole being pulls down the plot and the story into an annoying Mary Sue sitcom. I must admit, I am finding a hard time of finding a good GaaraxOC fic. I've just recently finished an amazing one-The Obsession by -you should check it out. And I'm craving for more, you know? I'm kind of still reading your fic because of that. I don't hate it, it's actually interesting.
Please,please, please don't make Reiko another Mary Sue .
Cereza101 chapter 65 . 2/2/2014
That sounded like a script from final fantasy 7 advent children.
When tifa is talking to cloud
And when cloud is talking to Rufus...
Eh. Oh well, still an awesome story
XD
draupadi chapter 90 . 10/31/2013
This was a great story. I love it.
Aiedail4eva chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Good so far. You did a good job with connecting the OC to the reader and making the reader feel bad for the OC. I don't KNOW Reiko yet, but it's a good start to getting to know her. The analogy between the cat and Reiko is a nice touch. :) And I am left wondering what the necklace that Sarutobi left is for, which makes me want to continue reading. Good job!
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