Reviews for Retribution
Negative critisism chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Nami was OOC. There was no grammar. Think of a better plot next time. Or at least a better subject. _ Geez.
Mysteria Pearl chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
That was so funny! Hehehe... Zoro hates cleaning the bathroom... hehehehe! That's just hillarious! Anyhoo, wonderful job, keep up the good [hillarious] work!

Mysteria Pearl
cloudsdreams chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
It's so funny XD

I like it.

I like how Nami got her 'revenge' XD

Anyway, congratulations.

Cloudsdreams
Perpetual Concern chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
That was great! You've given me a picture in my head about Zoro cleaning the bathroom. Write another One Piece story soon please.