|Reviews for El Torrente|
| Lady Cheshire chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Moving, dark, exceptionally written descriptions and dialogue, succinct- and terribly underappreciated. Excellent work.
| Killingmemory chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I really enjoyed this. Nice take on L's first case. There was just something so original about this. Very well written.
| xi.writes chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
I'm surprised that this has so few reviews!
A fantastic character study with a depth of feeling that truly touches the reader.
Will be adding to my C2, even though it's not at all a romance. _~
| arcanegel chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Aw, I feel sorry for L...and that little girl, but more for L. K's successor, huh? I don't think anyone else made L have someone to be better than or something, but anyway this is good.
| flyingwyvern chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Very well written. It's a nice look into L's beginnings, and it kept my rapt attention the whole way through. One little typo, though:
"“It seems that way,” Wammy replies, sneaking thin fingers of the boy’s shoulder. “But don’t be so pessimistic.”"
Shouldn't it be, "sneaking thin fingers ON TO the boy's shoulder," or something like that? I dunno...
At any rate, nice oneshot. I liked it. :)