Reviews for At first you don't succeed
kariza2013 chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
really like!
kage kitsune 14 chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
Update soon, please.
BreGyrl23 chapter 5 . 10/16/2011
hurry up with chapter 6 please
The Weatherwitch chapter 5 . 11/15/2010
certainly an interesting story...

your sentence structure can be little confusing, but all in all, this is good!

update soon!
AddictedtoHPForever chapter 5 . 2/23/2010
kwisabeachbabe chapter 5 . 9/23/2009
This is really good please update
riegert8 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I thought that it was nice that Dumbledore apologize to Harry for his mistake, I think that Harry forgave too easy but don't get me wrong that Harry sould not forgive that Harry sould take time to see if Dumbledore changed, It easy to say sorry for it just words. what counts is a person action after they realize they made a mistake, What step do a person take that they never make the same mistake again. My cousin Virginia is very good at apologizing but she never mean it for their just words
riegert8 chapter 5 . 3/7/2009
Interesting chapter
nightwing27 chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
wow you doing good for your first story and being 14 your good at writing don't take long with your next chapter way too many stories likes this are being dropped and never update at least we want something that last long finish normal
nightwing27 chapter 3 . 3/4/2009
wow way cool lol
nightwing27 chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
cool a heir story one of favorites stuff to read
nightwing27 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
good start I hope the pairting will be harry/ginny I hate those idiot who hates that pairing
mich1990 chapter 2 . 12/26/2008
first i want to tell you that i love your story and the second thing i wanted to say:

if it was your intention to have the weapons and clothes from the founders the same as the house colours, you made a slight mistake because ravenclaw is blue and bronze and hufflepuff is black and yellow
Mrs.R.R.Lupin-Jones-2- Temp chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
It would have been more intresting if you sent him back sometime after he had started Hogwarts as many others go to the start of his first year. But it's still brilliant :-D. If you haven't got a Beta I wouldn't mind doing it for you, but I am not an offical one on this site though...

Update soon!
Alfy chapter 4 . 12/25/2008
Wow good story cant wait for the next chapter
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