Reviews for Deep City Lights
SeanEmma4Evr chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Another great interlude that kept my attention. Again, I LOVE how you've placed them in San Francisco. Normally I HATE when people take Harry Potter out of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland, but you've proven an exception in this case. I'm enjoying it a great deal.

The references you made to San Francisco were also excellent. Even though I live an hour away, I knew everything you were talking about. I loved picturing Snape in a studio apartment, with a giant loft and a kitchen mingling with the bedroom/living area. It seems bizarre, particularly with all the windows. I also didn't miss the subtle reference to Lombard Street. Everytime I go to the city, I make it a point to go down, lol.

Anyway, off topic - the story - great way to engage us into it, particularly into Snape's character. I thought he saved Hermione because he knew her, but I was wrong! He saved some random muggle for selfless reasons, extremely selfless reasons seeing as it easily could have cost him his life. As for the whole "someone" sending her...I wonder how that will pan out when the two wake up. I'm guessing Snape will be awake the next time Hermione's eyes open.

And...

"Sweet masturbating Merlin in a broomstick shop" - Are you kidding me? I haven't laughed so hard in a while!

Looking forward to more (and Ties - I'm sorry, I HAD to throw that in there) soon.

-SeanEmma4Evr
leader.of.equals chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
i LOVE this storyline so far, and am anxious for you to continue. i especially like the Ron/Hermione situation-somehow I never could see them in a happy marriage. and, of course, Snape is as perfect as ever, and you've done a good job so far of replicating his character from canon, which is always appreciated. keep writing! it's great.
KlingonGal chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
This is a freaking GOOD story! Update soon and often, please!
kazfeist chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Looks to be very interesting! I love San Francisco; Snape's loft seems just like him. :D
GoodMorningCampers chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Wow, I had sort of forgotten about this story, but I'm glad I alerted it. I really love the environment you've set Severus up in, seems really realistic. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.

Cheers

Sam.
Happyhighlandcoo chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
I love SS/HG! I'm glad you decided to write it

can't wait for the next one :)
CantTakeMyEyesOffYou chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Oh.

I can't wait.
debjunk chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
This is great. Nice save by Severus. Can't wait to see what happens.
grangerinvestigations chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
MORE! I really, really like this story so far, and I don't mind the Snape/Hermione pairing; if anyone can do it well, you can. But I need more, and soon!
xxxxxxxx00000000 chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
hi, i used to leave unisgned reviews for you as 'Amy' but I got an account so now i can sign them! I like where you seem to be going with this, and as always-excellent characterization of Hermione. Can't wait for the next update!
me chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Love it! Can't wait to hear more! Thanks for the entertainment...
kazfeist chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Wow, Kyra! What a beginning! :D
Vashka chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Man, this sounds like the worst day *EVER.* Poor Hermione! Glad to see you're writing, even if it is SS/HG :P Can't wait for more!
Claire M C chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
I really like this story, and I love your writing style. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Margot Le Faye chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Yeah, it's not my OTP either, but all your work is brilliant, so I am enjoying this, regardless of who Hermione is going to end up with. I am terribly sorry to hear of your injury, which I gather you sustained right before the holidays. Let me wish you a speedy and uncomplicated recovery. And thanks for posting this fic.
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