Reviews for Deep City Lights
MerlockedWhovian chapter 2 . 7/26/2008
More please! Great story!
OtherwiseTheDarkness chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
i really like where this is going, are you going to continue it?

i hope so! ]
sodabug chapter 2 . 4/13/2008
i really like where this is going- there's a lot of potential and character arc! please don't abandon this piece, it'd be a shame to have a good severus/hermione work disappear into nothingness- we need more!
LadyLefaye chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
Great story so far. I love that they didn't immediately fall in love the moment they ran into one another again. Can't wait to see what happens next!
icyicy6 chapter 2 . 2/1/2008
absolutely gorgeous usual, i've been a huge fan of ur fanfics ever since i read Valentine Encounter... Can't wait for the next chap!
Ruth chapter 2 . 1/30/2008
I really like this story. Kinda antsy for updates though.
Mrs.Hermione Jane Weasley chapter 2 . 1/28/2008
Wonderful! Can't wait for more!
xxxxxxxx00000000 chapter 2 . 1/26/2008
can't wait for the next update. top notch writing as always!
moi chapter 2 . 1/26/2008
i love your writing. its easy to follow, but not dull and predictable. you definitely took me by surprise; i was expecting draco malfoy, not snape ... although i am not usually a snape/hermione shipper, i'll give this story a go ... i am a BIG fan of your stories :)
ChellChellSEA chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Wow, I can't wait for more! Continue this with fever!
SeanEmma4Evr chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Another great interlude that kept my attention. Again, I LOVE how you've placed them in San Francisco. Normally I HATE when people take Harry Potter out of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland, but you've proven an exception in this case. I'm enjoying it a great deal.

The references you made to San Francisco were also excellent. Even though I live an hour away, I knew everything you were talking about. I loved picturing Snape in a studio apartment, with a giant loft and a kitchen mingling with the bedroom/living area. It seems bizarre, particularly with all the windows. I also didn't miss the subtle reference to Lombard Street. Everytime I go to the city, I make it a point to go down, lol.

Anyway, off topic - the story - great way to engage us into it, particularly into Snape's character. I thought he saved Hermione because he knew her, but I was wrong! He saved some random muggle for selfless reasons, extremely selfless reasons seeing as it easily could have cost him his life. As for the whole "someone" sending her...I wonder how that will pan out when the two wake up. I'm guessing Snape will be awake the next time Hermione's eyes open.


"Sweet masturbating Merlin in a broomstick shop" - Are you kidding me? I haven't laughed so hard in a while!

Looking forward to more (and Ties - I'm sorry, I HAD to throw that in there) soon.

leader.of.equals chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
i LOVE this storyline so far, and am anxious for you to continue. i especially like the Ron/Hermione situation-somehow I never could see them in a happy marriage. and, of course, Snape is as perfect as ever, and you've done a good job so far of replicating his character from canon, which is always appreciated. keep writing! it's great.
KlingonGal chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
This is a freaking GOOD story! Update soon and often, please!
kazfeist chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Looks to be very interesting! I love San Francisco; Snape's loft seems just like him. :D
GoodMorningCampers chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Wow, I had sort of forgotten about this story, but I'm glad I alerted it. I really love the environment you've set Severus up in, seems really realistic. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.


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