|Reviews for Umbrella|
| riceflower3 chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
I really liked it from Orihime's p.o.v. but its so sad and the angst ermergurd ;-;
Psh, when I read the kissing scene, I immediately rewinded back to the anime scene to see if something like that had actually happened and I'd missed it (*-*)... but then I remembered Kubo. And how he so rarely puts characters together e.e
But it was really good. 20/10 :3
| Ayrmed chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
It was sad but very well written.
| kNOTdahkawaiiDINOsaur chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Okay, at first I was gonna throw up about Inoue's list.. I mean, that's just crazy.. Obssession is a sinful attraction, different from under circumstances like this.. Anyways.!
Second, i almost throw my itouch cuz inoue's always like, "Kurosaki-kunKurosaki-kunKurosaki-kun!" Gah! If only I could tape her mouth when she always do that, -.-
And for the third, I was all "kyaaaaa!" When they kissed and, "Kubo why didn't you do this?" I was like an idiot quietly talking to myself and to the mirror to keep calm XD
As you can see in this review, i'm a majorsuperduperultramegafan of ichiruki :))) i'm crazy for them. As in.
Well that's my review, so.. Peace out yow! :3
| Yoko Fujioka chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
OMG that was so freaking sad, i always did like Orihime more than Rukia so it's breaking my heart! More than just unrequited love, her love/obsession for him seems like more than that (although maybe it's just because you added too many details and emotions and nearly ripped my heart out you bastard XDD)
*runs away crying* ; A ;
| suicune4ever chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This is a wonderful story! I feel sorry for Orihime but... I'm not exactly her biggest fan -.-'
... so I was just happy with all the IchiRuki fluff : )
| purplepam chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Its really cute...I loved Inoue's viewpoint..
| Alicia Quin chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
That was really sad, but well written. There were a few mistakes with commas here and there, but it was still amazing! You have talent.
| Shinigami1216 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Don't be so hard on your self, the story was really good.
XP ja ne
| ichirukitard chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Beautiful one - shot. Loved it! :)
| ojou-chan chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
This is a 'wow'..
Two thumbs up for u! bd
| shie0917 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
wow! i'm a huge huge ichiruki fan! yay~ i feel bad for inoue here...but then again, i never really could stand her. but this pov of her's was really well written! thank you for sharing ur story!
| GuessWho25 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
It was good, sad but good
| kit chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
it was good you shouldnt doubt yourself.
| redphyire chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
poor inoue... i bet she's reely jealous of ichi and rukia... n i reely pity her. she seemed really hurt when she was healing rukia. but still, i support ichiruki and ulquihime! )
| maplecat chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
how can u say this is crap? this is GOOD!