Reviews for Dave's Witch
Guest chapter 8 . 6/21
blood I hope Alvin and simon okay
liam dw chapter 9 . 7/29/2015
well done verry good i wish i could just jump into and have helped the poor munks. well done you should be proud of yourself
damn chapter 4 . 4/7/2015
This babysitter is awful...your awful for writing a story like this...dayum
Rachel chapter 2 . 11/16/2014
Thumbs up 4 Simon!
Paige chapter 9 . 7/12/2014
What an awesome story I couldn't stop reading that story was AMAZING!
KelseyMarieFeldhan chapter 7 . 4/16/2014
Oh god! And no one heard him besides his brothers?!
KelseyMarieFeldhan chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
O_O Oh god Alvin... Wait. I am confused... How old are the boys?
orchestra rocks 101 chapter 9 . 3/1/2013
I really liked it
Amie Louise chapter 9 . 3/10/2012
great story!
DJ Bunny chapter 6 . 1/20/2012
If I keep holding my britches, people might tthink my pants are too big! XD
DJ Bunny chapter 3 . 1/20/2012
X rated... XD LOL. (Some people don't know this, XD is a laughing face)
DJ Bunny chapter 2 . 1/20/2012
Creepy...I'm a girl, so yeah, I want to slap Alvin in the face with a freakin' buttersock. XD
DJ Bunny chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
I love AFV, too.
CuddlyHawk chapter 9 . 12/24/2011
I'm reviewing your stories backwards. I left the best review of the last story I read, Witch's Revenge, then I'll review this one, then Hiding a Fight. Like I said on With's Revenge, your stories are written very nicely. They flow from one idea to the next beautifully, they show time passing well, and they are just the right length for a good short story. I like how you describe everything as if you were actually there, feeling everything with them; it helps us as readers feel what the character is feeling at that moment and really helps us connect with them more in your story.
jasmine chapter 4 . 7/17/2011
This chapter book is great . I love the chipmunks
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