|Reviews for Identity Crux|
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/5/2013
A fantastic fanfic, very impressive twists. Some misspellings and suchlike, but not enough to deter me. Just wished that it didn't end the way it did .
| YaoiFanGirl1990 chapter 18 . 8/25/2009
NO sequel TT what happened to Terra? Does she and BB ever get back together...I wanna know...but i'm content with how it ended _
| JabberwockSlayer chapter 18 . 6/15/2008
No happy ending?
A bittersweet one, nethertheless, but...
You've left me speechless.
| JabberwockSlayer chapter 17 . 6/15/2008
Have I ever mentioned how much I LOVE Kid Flash? I was cracking up. And the Terra/BB bit- you are awesome, dude. AWESOME!
And I love Jinx too. So blunt.
"I break stuff."
| Forlorn Melody chapter 17 . 6/6/2008
That was the last chapter? Something about the last line didn't seem all that conclusive, but the brilliance of the rest of the chapter made up for it. I hope to see more Teen Titan fanfics from you.
| ERRORINVALID chapter 16 . 5/31/2008
Hm... still a bit wary of Tori...
*gasp* Rebekah is even worse than I thought... trying to destroy the multiverses.
Speaking of multiverses... Have you read 52? It's absolutely awesome. I had to read it a few times through to catch all the little clues that didn't make sense until the end, but I loved it.
Whoops, I digress...
Yeah, sometimes critical reviews do put you in a funk, huh?
I think every writer goes back and rereads their old work and can't help but think - I wrote THAT?
LOL, I've wanted to change entire elements of the plot but it was too late.
I suppose there's nothing we can do but look back, laugh, and thank readers for surviving a cringefest of words.
I'll give you this though - this is one kickass story.
| JabberwockSlayer chapter 16 . 5/23/2008
I really don't like Rebekah. XDD I liked the chapter, a little short, but still good!
| Forlorn Melody chapter 15 . 5/15/2008
Wow. The first part of the chapter, mostly the dialouge didn't appeal to me for some reason, but the fight scenes and the cliffy more than made up for it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| ERRORINVALID chapter 15 . 5/12/2008
Y'know, under all that tough, badass exterior, Ravager's a pretty damn cool friend - I mean, really. It's sewage...
And proof that she really is one of the greatest badass women created...
“Because it’s exactly what you’re supposed to be thinking, and what you would be if you’d stop reveling in your goddamn angst! We are going to go rescue the goddamn princess, save the goddamn world, eliminate the goddamn villain, and then ride into the goddamn sunset! You have a problem with that?”
Rightly said, Ravager.
LOL. Super acid... because regular is NEVER enough when it comes to super-villanery.
*gasp* Tori, that traitor!
| AlsoSprachOdin chapter 7 . 5/10/2008
And this chapter is where I got to when I stopped reading. Raven's going OOC was just the last of some four of my typical-TT-fanfiction-turnoffs. I really hate it when authors break my favourite character. And this one is so common I got sick of it two years ago.
The first was Red X's seemingly invulnerability. I'm talking before he got regeneration. I can't fault you for this one; the original creators made X a damn plot devise in and off himself, the way he can instantly trump ALL the Titans but Robin. Man, Robin could even break a x-bond around his ankles whereas Starfire suddenly forgets she can fly when she is hit by one of those.
And I'm not much for clichés I've read a hundred times before: Robin becoming obsessed, locking himself in a dark room, spending hours and hours trying to find out anything. The Boy Wonder, trained by the "world's greatest detective", and still he finds *nothing* over the course of these many hours, as usual.
Not to mention Starfire, the princess of a interplanetary race of warriors, subjected to Gordanian slavery and having experienced numerous close encounters with death, acting like a little baby.
The OC's were fine, I didn't mind Tori that much. I missed Beast Boy and Cyborg, though.
The writing itself is decent. Good grammar, few typos, fine vocabulary. It flowed well.
But I just don't want to read something that makes me sigh in disgust with regular intervals when my personal fandom is offended, and thus I leave your story with this short review and a long rant.
| ERRORINVALID chapter 14 . 5/9/2008
AHh. Dang, my reviewing skills are slacking. I'm sorry. I don't check my inbox as often because of school.
On to the review...
TWO Red Xs? Ha! I was right, Maddox *was* X... kind of.
-snicker- snoo snoo... Which reminds me, "Femputer orders death!" -gasp- "...by snoo snoo" "Yes!"
OMG. The multiverse? And the League?
You weave a comlicated web of a story here. This is going to be one heck of a ride.
Aw, we got some BBxT action here.
| JabberwockSlayer chapter 15 . 5/9/2008
You got a Joey reference in there! And no, no one is as incredible as Nightwing. Well, Duela and Flamebird are pretty dang awesome, but still.
AHA! Rose's entire history! I actually just got the issues where Rose goes nuts from the library. And this sums up my reaction to both those comics and this chapter.
O.O Dude... AWESOME!
So, wait- is Tori a traitor?
I need MORE!
| JabberwockSlayer chapter 14 . 5/2/2008
Multiverse? SCORE! COMIC REFERENCE!
'Kid Flash held Ravager in his arms'
Another comic reference? You have made me very happy, the only way to make me happier is-
'Terra stood, speechless, as Beast Boy ran ahead. He looked over his shoulder and smiled, and she felt her heart thump fast in her chest. She knew this feeling. It was the same from before, from long before.'
Oh my God.
BB/T-NESS! *faints in happiness*
Bohemians, as in the characters from Rent. D
Psh, Batman's not so amazing. You're a more talented writer than he is. *flicks Batman off cliff*
| ERRORINVALID chapter 13 . 4/30/2008
LOL. Beast Boy teaches us a valuable lesson on the stock market through Neopets...
AH! They have Raven! No...
Ooh, and what's Project Mirror?
LOL, I know you'll just give me some cryptic answer, but it's fun to ponder...
| JabberwockSlayer chapter 13 . 4/27/2008
'ATTACK MY PROFANITY SINGING PUPPETS'
No...way... AVENUE Q! D *breaks out into 'It Sucks To Be Me'*
But I have profanity singing Bohemians. Burn.
'She'd probably become BFF with Poison Ivy or something.'
I'd be sitting in the corner, quoting Lewis Carrol with the Mad Hatter. XD
And I'll let you know right now, I love bad-ass Terra. As much as I love BB/T, I love it when Terra gets bad-ass like in the comics.
But not what she did with Slade. .
“Damn, we sure cry a lot, don’t we?”
Heh, Rose is PWNsome.
If only we could work Joey and Grant in there...
XD, just kidding!