Reviews for A New Tale
Akirina chapter 2 . 4/10/2010
Not bad... It's very interesting! pls continue!
JadedFoxFire chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
pretty good for a start, but you kind of need to work on the grammar and what people are saying. Example: “What shall we name the poor thing, Marellen, an older woman with brown curls asked?"

It's off.

Aside from that, pretty good.
meiko chapter 2 . 5/14/2008
i would love to read more of this, i think it promises to be a lovely story.
foxymalon64 chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
aw i really like this! its so adorable. she sounds like Garion and Errand all put into one, but a girl haha. i like it, please update soon!
GoddessOfLove-War-Light-Dark chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
Interesting story