|Reviews for Mess with one Generation, Mess With The Next|
| noradiana chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I tld you I would read some other stories you wrote and I am but why did this one stop? It sounds good. Please go on. if you need help you can just ask
| RaInDroPs614 chapter 2 . 10/7/2009
PLEASE think of updating this story.. its really good :D
| RaInDroPs614 chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
you should continue this story, it sounds really good so far.
| Broken Sword of the Morning chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
Giving the reader a sense of foreboding, what with Raven's vision. A nice touch, though a little cliché.
Otherwise, well done.
| Broken Sword of the Morning chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
I'd've thought the planet would have a name with no numbers, and that the moons would then be numbered.
You did the exact opposite thing.
Meh, more power to you. :)
Yeah, X's and Q's work, but then there usually won't be a "U" after the Q.
Also, doesn't Wikipedia have something on the subject?
| Sta-R-obin chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
I LIKED THE LAST 2 SENTENCES! It's all I have time to read right now cause I've gotta get to class. Wish me luck, I've got my 6 weex exam in math! Lol, update this thing soon! Lol,
| Sta-R-obin chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
I'm telling you right now that I didn't get the chance to read this chapter, but from what I've read from you already, it's gotta be good. I'm going to read it later, but I thougth i'd just review to tell you how awesome you are! (I know will be) great story!
| Fansquealing chapter 2 . 4/8/2008
Pleaze update soon!But this time Make 'em longer!
| jessica.brooke chapter 2 . 3/25/2008
I like it! Its cool! Update when you can! XOXO xStarfirexRobinxo :)
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
| SuPeR HyPeR chick 101 chapter 2 . 12/31/2007
I' m a little confused about the plot but it sounds good! Update soon!
| moonlitsfantasy chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Oh darn, I ran out of pineapples. Will applesauce do? Jk. It was really good. I take pride in being the first reviewer. Of course I wish it were longer, but who doesn't?
Good job and update soon!
And thanks for the dedication. Means the world!