great story. and time is the key to all -

One hing I don't like about your stories is that you always have a 14 year old girl acting like because her parents want to punish her for something that the parents are in the wrong. It shows just how childish she really is because I wonder how she would feel it if it was her 14 year old daughter and lets be honest saying stuff like I will do whatever I want just because her parents don't agree shows that the most. Yeah I get it she remembers being an adult and being in love but she is still a child and it is her parent home and food she eats. They are the ones taking care of her and they are the ones that will have to suffer if something happens like her getting pregnant from sleeping with her boyfriend. this child has no job, hasn't finished school and yet she thinks because of her power that gives her the right to act however she wants. the first time they had sex because of them needing to bond is one thing but after that.

And any progress, psychologically, that Rei might have made, just went out of the window...

Me-thinks that a part of the attraction that Rei feels towards Mamoru lies in because that, subconsciously, she's comparing him to her emotionally-distant, politician father, seeing Mamoru and his 'love' as a proxy for the love that she hardly got from her politician father, as if Mamoru can fill what her father has left empty.

WHY WAS THIS FANFIC PUBLISHED BEFORE I WAS EVEN BORN
This is so good now I’m officially obsessed with yet another cartoon

1992 Anime's Rei Hino is some-what like Caroline Bingley, from Jane Austin's "Pride and Prejudice"!

okay just finished reading this FANTASTIC work or art it was Amazing and by far my favorite sailor moon story. im just sorry I did not comment on any of the chapters because I wanted to know what happens next, but I just wanted to thank you for not only writing this amazing, beautiful creative work but also for Sharing your creativity and imagination with us because this story should be read by others. so I just to show my gratitude to you for creating this story and having the imagination to take it where you took it. so thank you very much and I look forward to reading your other work

TEA EXPERT HERE!

Actually it DOES matter what kind you drink! I recommend a good, non-caffinated Herbal Tea.

This is such a great story I'm so glad that bing pick this story to read. Love the plot and the way emotions are so natural.

You are definitely my favorite Sailor Moon Fanfiction's Writer!
I absolutely loveee long chapters that are well articulated and detailed, and you always give that, thank you 3
Good luck in everything, and I guess I'll write you in the next story of your I read!

YES! LITERALLY THE BEST SAILOR MOON FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ! I LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCH!️️️️️️️️️ Such good writing! I literally want all of my bookcases stocked with fanfiction a you’ve written!️ ~LoneWolf004

Just some points need to be made:

1. What Mamoru calls teasing can actually be considered emotional abuse; a guy who treats a girl like that, with stupid and demeaning name calling, ridiculous barbs at how much she eats and how she looks sounds pretty abusive to me;

2. Rei followed Mamoru’s awful treatment of Usagi, but she took it a little farther by demeaning everything about her friend to the point Usagi started internalizing everything and doubting herself;

3. Some of Rei’s concerns are valid, because for what reason would Usagi pretend to be dumb, go really bad in school and destroy her academic career and possible chances of going to a decent College? Seriously, what can justify such stupidity? Find me one good reason and I will shut up.

4. Rei kind of got a point when complaining about Usagi’s inability to fight; from Rei’s point of view as a Scout, they work together in order to find and protect the Princess; that being said, how can Usagi protect their Princess if can barely protect herself? Rei can’t save Usagi every time, and Sailor Moon should take her responsibilities seriously. How many times have we seen Sailor Moon crying in the middle of a damn fight, screaming like a child or freezing up like a deer in front of headlights?

5. After seeing how completely untrained and useless Sailor Moon was in battle, I say this regarding her lack of fighting power, all the Scouts should have banded together and created a training schedule for Sailor Moon, so their friend could stand a chance of surviving the enemy. They should all have trained her seriously, rigorously, so she would understand and accept her role as a leader and gain more confidence in herself;

6. Instead, the Scouts started using Usagi’s “failures in corresponding to their high standards” as a way to vent, to the point of blaming Usagi for everything that went wrong; the Scouts became blind to their own shortcomings, deciding to use a scapegoat for their frustrations. Usagi was just the unfortunate chosen.

Anyways, the story is good, but those points needed to be properly addressed. Mamoru has a lot of responsibility for how things culminated in Usagi’s life. He had no right to abuse her as a way to flirt. Society needs to stop saying it’s okay for men to hurt women, because it’s a sign they like her. Nope, it’s abuse. End of story.

The guy say things that makes you feel dumb, ugly, stupid and overall low as a person? Walk away, because he’s abusive. Calling a girl fat, dumb, stupid, lazy or imbecile is shameful and demeaning, and prejudicial to the emotional and psychological state of a girl as young as Usagi, she’s just 14, of course she’s going to do stupid things. Leave her alone, people!

So why did she pretend to be a dumb blond and a crybaby? I always found ridiculous how canon Usagi would cry in the middle of a battle or throw tantrums like a kid.

I also found odd how the Senado never offered to train Usagi, especially Makoto who is a fucking martial artist. She should have helped the moment she saw Usagi fail at defending herself.

They all failed as her friends and Rei is extremely rude and cruel and I cannot understand her problems with Usagi. It seems Rei takes pleasure in hurting Usagi, and that’s fucking abusive and toxic.

About Mamoru, I gotta day that verbal abuse is not an endearing way to flirt. I would drop this jerk after the first insult, just like I would walk away from a man after the first slap.

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