|Reviews for Usagi's Struggles|
| Teela's Snakestaff chapter 8 . 6/4/2010
Oh, man, Rei's going to blow a gasket, isn't she? And what is with her anyway? Is she really that selfish and jealous that she's turned mean and spiteful? And Usagi's 'cold'. I'm thinking it has to do more with not being a Senshi rather than germs. I love the interaction between Mamoru and Usagi. I especially love that you used the Star Locket to bring the truth out. I always wished that had happened in the Anime (never read the manga, so don't know if that was the case there). I hope you will be able to continue with this story. I really like how it is developing.
| chocomonkey1018 chapter 8 . 6/2/2010
OMG! i love the ending description of Rei :) its hilarious to picture.. so far the story has been great and i cant wait for you to update it!
| UsagiMoon chapter 8 . 6/1/2010
oh darn the chapter is over...update soon
| aurimaedre chapter 8 . 5/25/2010
Oh! I'm sad I finished and it was a cliffhanger! I really like the story tho, you should continue on!
| TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 8 . 5/8/2010
This is some great Usagi/Mamoru interaction. Ahh! Never thought I'd see the day! *wipes away tear* I love how you showed another side to Usagi so she's not just some "dumb blonde" or whatever. Awesome, awesome plotline.
I just have one question though. Is Rei going to continue to act so bitchy? Because it'd be nice if everyone could reconcile. Not that I'm saying you have to, but it would be nice.
Anyways, Update soon!
kawaiiartist-san signing out! :3
| dreamingwandererofthelight chapter 8 . 5/1/2010
So awesome! please continue!
| Valkarious chapter 8 . 4/23/2010
Defiantely looking foward to reading more, keep up the good work :)!
| happinessisHarryPotter chapter 8 . 4/18/2010
Please update soon. I am looking forward to the confrontation. :] Mamoru and Usagi are so cute. Together and separately :]
| PleaseDeletePlease chapter 8 . 4/13/2010
I'll admit, that's the first time an author called me out on adding it to story alert but not reviewing. XP
Alright, so I'll start with what I like about your story. I like how the characters are being developed, and the relationships don't feel rushed. The detail makes it realistic and absorbing. I also really enjoy Serena's dreams, and I can't wait to see what they have to do with future events (if anything). That, and I'm a fan of your long chapters.
Okay, so what I think you should work on. Just one thing really, I get a little confused when you finish a narrative by one character and jump to another, but have those new events happening at a time that overlaps the original narrative. This was mostly an issue in chapter seven.
Also, I hope Usagi recovers her voice soon, reading all her responses is getting a little weird (though I guess not all that much time has passed in the story line, just a few days though it feels longer). Though I do look forward to seeing how that works out with her encounter with Rei and the other senshi.
Alright, there's eight chapters worth of reviews. Hopefully it helped some.
I look forward to seeing a new chapter (hopefully soon).
| TheSecretUchiha chapter 8 . 4/10/2010
wow, just read through this whole fic and it's absolutely AMAZING!
please update soon cause i just can't wait to see how rei reacts!
| luckycomet09 chapter 8 . 4/8/2010
Great job! Haha, can't wait to read more ]
| Musik Drache chapter 8 . 4/4/2010
| ARABELLA VIOLETTA chapter 8 . 3/31/2010
Sorry for the late review i red your msg that you updated but i did not have time to reed it until this moment ( i moved back to Italy and you can imagin all the work...)eny way back to this Mamoru stuk in a closet i had a heck of a time imagine that you sed you are not aiming for humor but boy that wass funny :D especialy the " maybe he wold come away from her house toight with a girlfriend " i was practicly on the flor poor guy )).
I'm surprised i did not turn into a marshmalou after the biggining of the chepter they are so sweet togheter they always were but you make them all the more,i'm not a romantic and i hate the too sapy stuf but i love reeding about them from your storys ; 't you just love how sweet he is ...i think i'm in love )) i hope my finace dosen't find out ;P.
Of corse i liked the flashback from the Silver Milenium and the story of the loket from your point it's very original great work!
I imagin this chapter took a lot out of you with all the diferent point of wiews from diferent persons and i complement you on a great job and of corse i'm glad the girls are seeig where they went rong and that Usagi is difrent from them in the fights...especialy Amy she is defenitly the smart one :D and about Rei oh brother let's not go there how dense can you be...
Nice thing with the dream very intresting ,ok to make this review short i loved the chapter like always and i do hope to reed another update soon but if the finished work is like always i kan wayt with no problems :D keep on the great work bye
| bakagirl123 chapter 8 . 3/30/2010
update soon please
| Artemesia-Hime chapter 8 . 3/26/2010
Oh gosh! Well I realized (after my third time reading this whole story again) that I haven't reviewed! So, *SQUEAL* they are official! Raye...oh that girl annoys me but the girls are coming out from under her horrid influence. And really I hope Mamoru yells at them for being crappy friends. It would make me laugh and be just what they deserved. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next one!