|Reviews for Heart of the Beast|
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/14
That ending broke my heart
| Zizi chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
Its really good! Please do not make it have lemons down the road! your doing a wonderful job having them be fiscal and being descriptive but not too descriptive Which is sooo refreshing! Thank you!
| Zizi chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
Oh my gosh I love this! your doing a great (need t find another adjective) job. Thank you, for keeping things classy and interesting! there's nothing like tasteless smutt to wreck a good story and yet you are able to make it stomach dropping and romantic.
| Zizi chapter 5 . 12/10/2014
Its good Puals freaking out then calming down was kinda abrupt but it was fine, the stories good and it has a plot which is nice. I like it thanks!
| Zizi chapter 4 . 12/10/2014
Nice, its a little sudden Pual suddenly liking her and all, but you did say you changed your mind so that explains it. Its good, and I cant wait to see were it goes next. I only wonder how you will keep up the tension between Pual and Cara, but Im reading to find out. Thank you, for this great fanfic!
| Zizi chapter 3 . 12/10/2014
Wow that was great, you kept this seductive with the vampire without losing the artistic class it takes to keep things from becoming crass. Thank you, this is great!
| Zizi chapter 2 . 12/10/2014
Love it. Your very good, people actually have distinct personalities (which i havent found in most fanfics) and the main girl is likable! You did a great job with describing her, most fanfic writers make the girl like into some super model and you made her humble and very likable. Nice work!
| Zizi chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Made me laugh. I hope its like this throughout, I like that its not filled with swearing or crude sexual comments. Your good I hope its like this throughout. Thank you i've been looking for a story like this
| HalloweenSpell chapter 23 . 9/12/2014
Why did you kill off Paul?! WHhhYYYYYYYYYYYYy?!
I' sorry. But NO!
| HalloweenSpell chapter 16 . 9/12/2014
Lot of stuff happened in that chapter...
Mind is blown...
| HalloweenSpell chapter 8 . 9/11/2014
Am on chapter 8, magical and beautiful are the first words to come into my head. Thank you somuch for writing this fanfic! xx
| wolf-girl-only-in-my-dreams chapter 23 . 1/22/2014
It's was a wonderful story but so sad. I'm crying. Poor cara.
| taylor.hall.5815 chapter 23 . 10/5/2013
This story is so good the ending made me cry
| ecrosth chapter 23 . 4/4/2013
Great job! I almost cried reading this! But I absolutely loved it!
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/12/2013
It was really good and made me cry