Reviews for breathe
Nienna Rose chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
I love the Inhumans & this was great! I mean who I never thought of her hair like that so it was unique and really, really well written, very imaginative!
Lorendiac chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I like it pretty well, even though I generally prefer stories that make the protagonist do a bit more problem-solving in the plot, instead of just being a woman walking down a hallway with her hair swirling about her. But as long as I'm here, I'll indulge in my penchant for Shameless Nitpicking. (After all, I have a reputation to maintain in that department.)

I spotted a couple of typoes. I'll quote your material inside asterisks - * like this * - to mark the differences between your words and mine.

* They server her faithfully, truly, without question *

"Serve her."

* The royal refuge – the heart of all Attlian, home to the Inhumans. *

It's called "Attilan" - not "Attlian."
Kim chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
I am supposed to use this space to critique but, I can't find anything to critique.