Reviews for Father's Creation
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2012
great story can't wait to see what happen next
angel50082 chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
wow! this is really interesting n well written thanx for writing n pls update soon i want to read more esp how kurama n hiei will get together XP
Chi Haku chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Please update quickly! It's been over a year! This was so good! PLEASE!

TTTT K'RAMA NEEDSA GO BACK T' HIS HIEI! AND KOENMA IS BEING BITCHY!

Oh, I have an idea. Make it so that K'rama's dad secretly experimented on him and put Yoko in him or gave him powers or something.
IllusionOfAghony chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
This is most interesting, I hope Kina and Hiei get to stay together and that Koenma (the baka) realises Hiei listens to Kurama and lets Kurama stay to help train and 'control' and befriend the little 'angle'
lightless love chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
OMG! AWESOMEE!

KEEP UPS THE WONDERFULS WORKS!

write on! ]
fireywolfchild chapter 2 . 9/11/2008
Wow! Usually i don't like stories that don't go along with the actual story, but this is wonderful! Please update soon!
Chi Haku chapter 2 . 8/25/2008
Homahgawd! . Next one! And I am currently hating Koenma.
Dragos-serenity chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
OMG! you have to write more, I need to see what happens. Thanks for writing it, hope to read more.
jadae chapter 2 . 6/22/2008
that was awsome more please.
mimifoxlove chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
Hi

This story is really interesting. I am really looking forward to find out what type of creatures Hiei Yukina are.

I am really not likeing liking Koenma.

update soon

mimi
Yuliya chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
THis is an aweseom story! how come it took you 4 months to update it? Please update agian but sooner! I want to read more!

Also Can I have the link to your manga please?
tat chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
what happens next, what happens next?suspence killing me. AH!
Alyxandrah chapter 2 . 4/18/2008
This is a awesome story. I like how Yukina is the older sibling. Usually it is Hiei who acts older. I hope that they see each other again (
Sakuto15 chapter 2 . 4/13/2008
omg i so glad your writing again, even with your forces writing your story is still GREAT! i can't wait for the next chapter...and if you're looking for like 30 reviews or something like other writers i totally wouldn't mind writing all of them. good luck with never ever having writers block again. D
Silvermane1 chapter 2 . 4/11/2008
cool
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