Reviews for Ten Percent
Faceted chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
The tone and voice are spot-on, the subject is suitably unnerving and- There is so very little Transmet fanfiction out there. I'm wholeheartedly pleased to find a gem like this one.
TheRowboat chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
This was a really good story that totally fit the world and feel of the comic. The Hive sounds like an organisation that could exist because the public are always depicted as such morons. I agree that it could have used some more expletives, but other than that it was dead on for Spider.
Yoarastrophe chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
I liked it, actually. Someone mentioned that it doesn't quite feel like Spider because of the lack of cursing, but I think that isn't quite accurate. It still manages to be in-character. An interesting idea, written well. I dig.
shanejayell chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Nice, but it doesn't quite sound like Spider. Not that I'd expect curse words every few lines, but it's almost too mild. Then again, I don't get his voice quite right either...