|Reviews for tossing a coin|
| Xx Onyx Pearl xX chapter 1 . 4/29
Loveee it and love the way you portrayed sakura :D
| itachi13080 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
LOVED IT! ;D The start of a Oneshot series and man is it brilliant with all it's AWESOMENESS! :D
| silveroaks chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
| young kagome chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
| pisquenta chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
You gotta love Shisui no matter how little he appears
| Eliphante chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Guess who got stuck in traffic again? Haha. I was going to reread Silk Kimono but this verse caught my eye. I'm not sure I read all of them.
Overall, it was very nice and hilarious . It wasn't overtly funny but the small quirks and gestures through Sakura's and Itachi's point of view were more than enough. I didn't notice any spelling or any other grammatical error. The only issue I had was that it didn't felt like it had really ended, more like an introduction. But I see that you have rectify that with two sequels in the same universe.
Some parts that stood out to me:
"Just which Uchiha are we talking about here? There are after all, so many of them."
"Itachi-sama, of course!"
A small smile quirked on pink lips. Bingo.
Hahaha, OF COURSE we're talking about Itachi. Never mind his "hot" brother or cousin or other relative. Itachi's the paragon of the Uchiha appeal. Seems like Sakura's a bit of a masochist with her satisfaction(?) that it's Itachi and he's bound to be difficult.
Sasuke-sama indeed. If she ever addressed the younger Uchiha with the honorific his fanclub used for him he was definitely going to get a bigger head than he already had.
I thought it was funny how Sakura takes such measures to make sure not to inflate Sasuke's ego. The word "indeed" really sets the tone for the sentence, it's a nice touch! ./thumbs up
Then Sasuke-baka just had to go and open his mouth and as they say, the rest was history.
If there was anyone suffering from a serious case of hero worship, thy name would be Uchiha Sasuke.
These hm... It's not exactly insults, but not exactly compliments either. I really enjoyed these sentences and I thought it really characterized Sasuke well, haha. And his relationship with Sakura and Itachi. The word "thy" was again a nice touch and really set the tone as well.
She was put here to heal him, not become his best friend.
Damn straight Sakura, you go girl. Hahaha. Sassy Sakura is the best!
"And by the way," Sakura paused at the threshold. "I hope that you will be mature about this and not sneak off like Kakashi-sempai always does. I would hate to inform Tsunade-sama to take your team off duty for an entire month just because their Captain was being insubordinate."
I'd love read about Kakashi sneaking out of the hospital and his team and Tsunade's reactions hahaha. But damn, Itachi you just got backed into a corner and you can't even fight back! More power to you Sakura, hehe.
Shisui could not help himself. He burst into laughter at his best friend's monotonous recital of his encounter with the aggressive medic.
Itachi sounded like he could not understand how it happened. Shisui started to laugh again.
Reading Itachi's thoughts relayed to Shisui was amusing. I feel like it's the tipping point of Itachi's "you have caught my interest" label.
Sakura raised a delicate pink brow. "Is that so?" she eyed the quiet ANBU with obvious amusemenet. "Sasuke was most stunned when he came across me as well."
Sassy Sakura 3
"My name is Itachi."
For some reason the fact that she could speak so familiarly with Shisui and not him did not sit well with him at all. In typical Uchiha fashion he immediately sought to rectify the situation.
The fact that her expression was an indirect cause of his brother made him distinctly irritated.
"What's your relationship with my younger brother?" He asked immediately.
"Use my name, Sakura-san."
And here we have Itachi's unconscious flirting? Haha. His attempts to get Sakura to be on a first name basis with him is just adorable. He doesn't want to feel left out and it seems he's starting to like Sakura as well and is trying to establish some sort of relationship. You're just too adorable Itachi c:
Thank you for the great read!
| soph chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Awesome! And yes, non-massacre fics are addicting gonna read the rest of this verse as well!
| Traumaddict chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I really enjoyed this :) You're a consistent author and I like your particular writing style and always look forward to flipping through your published content, especially if this particular couple is involved.
| Skyrere chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
I am beginning to like the non massacre fic's. Sasuke and Sakura would definitely be different than in the cannon universe, and I like your take on them.
| Motoko The Red Queen chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I read some of yours stories before and I was so eager to keep reading that I forgot to review, so I'm doing it now! Sorry, I'm kinda late. I love the way you portray Itachi
| Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Very nice, thank you for writing this. :D
| karinaOswag chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Amazing like always!
Hehe I love the part where Sakura Put sasuke in his place!
And I like that even though nothing happened, I felt good inside!
Keep on writing you amazing writer
| onyxeyedgirl36711 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I love your writing you are just so original and i love really every single one of your story!
you are an amazing writer
keep on writing
excellent job! :D
| LavenderSkies chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Go, Sakura! you show that high and mighty Uchiha he can't boss you around. haha. this one shot's amusing. I loved the interaction between all 3 characters. XD
| M chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Love sakura's character :) great work can't wait to see what happens next