|Reviews for Trivial Pursuit|
| King of Werewolves chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
| quillor chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Oh my word, it's so touching! _ I love it! Nice story!
| vivid4 chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
LOL now that was a new approach. Jack's unrequited love for Dorothy.. the ending was a tipsy bit extreme it nearly looks comedic, but (especially) considering your mood and given the (comedically) hopeless and unreciprocal nature of this romance it was not unexpected. Other than that, everything is fine - clear and concise, yet still sufficiently conveys the tragedy there was. And there was this mistake:
"She meant so little to him, even though she meant the world to him, even though he would do anything to ease her pain, even if it meant his own death."
It was supposed to be "He meant so little to her blah" wasn't it ?